Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below:　　1）隨著人們生活水平的提高，一些人認為節(jié)儉和樸素的生活方式已經(jīng)過時了　　2）但是很多人反對這種說法　　3）你的看法是，為什么?　　Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue?　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　行文思路　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一種觀點，提綱第2點提出另外一種相反的觀點，提綱第3點要求談談我的觀點，由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文。　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內(nèi)容：提出第1種觀點：節(jié)儉和樸素的生活方式已經(jīng)過時了，并說明理由;提出第2種觀點：節(jié)儉和樸素仍然是一種美德，并說明理由;表明我對節(jié)儉的看法，并說明理由。　　高分范文　　Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue?　　With the improvement of the living standards, many people are [1]no longer interested in the simple life style and some of them even feel ashamed to be thrifty. What they pursue is the latest fashion. In their eyes, thrift is already out of style.　　However, still other people insist that thrift is a good virtue. They say that the unprecedented power of production doesnt mean that we are entitled to a life of extravagance, because our natural resources are limited and some of them even are on the decline. Moreover, they hold that waste may lead to degradation of social atmosphere and environmental pollution as well.　　As to me, I prefer the latter opinion. I believeWaste not, want not. The truth of this saying is not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency. In fact, economic growth depends enormously on saving. Besides, there are still millions of Chinese living under poverty line. We can never afford reckless waste. Therefore, [10]it is no doubt that thrift is still a good virtue that we should not give up.　　亮點點評　　[1]不再。　　表示遞進。　　引出另外一種觀點。　　在下降。　　過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。　　用于引出自己的觀點或選擇。　　引用諺語儉以防匱。　　not but連接并列結(jié)構(gòu)，意為不是而是。　　現(xiàn)在分詞短語作后置定語。　　[10]毫無疑問。　　佳句臨摹　　佳句：Our natural resources are limited and some of them even are on the decline.　　臨摹：車禍使人們的財產(chǎn)遭受極大的損失，甚至還奪走了無數(shù)人的生命。　　___________________________________________________________________________.　　2.佳句：The truth of this saying is not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency.　　臨摹：我們永遠都不應該低估自己的能力，而應該相信一句諺語：有志者，事竟成。　　___________________________________________________________________________.　　KEY:　　Traffic accidents have caused great damages to peoples properties and even taken away thousands of peoples lives.　　2. We should never underestimate our abilities but should believe in the proverb: Where there is a will, there is a way.　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Dieting. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below:　　1）現(xiàn)在有越來越多人的選擇節(jié)食，有的人是為了健康，但是的人是為了有一個苗條的身材　　2）分析節(jié)食減肥可能帶來的影響　　3）你的建議　　On Dieting　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　行文思路　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現(xiàn)象并要求說明原因，提綱第2點要求分析這種現(xiàn)象可能帶來的影響，提綱第3點要求針對該現(xiàn)象提出我的建議，由此可判斷本文應為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內(nèi)容：描述越來越多的人節(jié)食的現(xiàn)象并分析主要原因;闡述節(jié)食不當可能帶來的影響;針對節(jié)食給出我的建議。　　高分范文　　On Dieting　　Nowadays more and more people are beginning to go on a diet. Some people are concerned with their health, and they go on a diet in order to lose unwanted weight. But still others, [1]especially the young women, are paying too much attention to their outward appearance. They become the leading numbers who go on a diet.　　However, dieting might bring great negative effects on people. For one thing, quite a lot of people dont really need dieting to keep health, and they diet just because they want to keep slim. For them, dieting not only is useless but also might damage their health. For another, some people lack enough knowledge on how to diet scientifically. As a result, they are likely to suffer from malnutrition.　　Considering the serious damage of unhealthy dieting, we should be cautious in dieting. In my opinion, dieting,for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance. Only with right guidance can dieting work as we expect.　　亮點點評　　[1]尤其，表示強調(diào)。　　成為主力軍。　　過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。　　用于引出對危害或負面影響的闡述。　　not only but also用于連接并列成分。　　考慮到，鑒于，介詞。　　不管因為什么原因，whatever意為無論什么。　　only+狀語位于句首，引起句子部分倒裝。　　像我們期望的那樣。　　佳句臨摹　　佳句：For them, dieting not only is useless but also might damage their health.　　臨摹：基因技術(shù)不僅使動植物受益而且還有助于提高人類的生活質(zhì)量。　　___________________________________________________________________________.　　2.佳句：In my opinion, dieting, for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance.　　臨摹： 無論你的目標是什么，你都必須通過誠實的勞動來實現(xiàn)它。　　___________________________________________________________________________.　　3.佳句：Only with right guidance can dieting work as we expect.　　臨摹：只有修滿足夠的學分，學生才能夠獲準畢業(yè)。　　___________________________________________________________________________.　　KEY:　　Genetic technology helps not only the plant and animals but also human beings to live a higher quality Whatever your aim is, you must worked honestly to attain it. Only when adequate credits have been achieved can students gain the qualification for graduation.

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below:　　1）隨著人們生活水平的提高，一些人認為節(jié)儉和樸素的生活方式已經(jīng)過時了　　2）但是很多人反對這種說法　　3）你的看法是，為什么?　　Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue?　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　行文思路　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一種觀點，提綱第2點提出另外一種相反的觀點，提綱第3點要求談談我的觀點，由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文。　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內(nèi)容：提出第1種觀點：節(jié)儉和樸素的生活方式已經(jīng)過時了，并說明理由;提出第2種觀點：節(jié)儉和樸素仍然是一種美德，并說明理由;表明我對節(jié)儉的看法，并說明理由。　　高分范文　　Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue?　　With the improvement of the living standards, many people are [1]no longer interested in the simple life style and some of them even feel ashamed to be thrifty. What they pursue is the latest fashion. In their eyes, thrift is already out of style.　　However, still other people insist that thrift is a good virtue. They say that the unprecedented power of production doesnt mean that we are entitled to a life of extravagance, because our natural resources are limited and some of them even are on the decline. Moreover, they hold that waste may lead to degradation of social atmosphere and environmental pollution as well.　　As to me, I prefer the latter opinion. I believeWaste not, want not. The truth of this saying is not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency. In fact, economic growth depends enormously on saving. Besides, there are still millions of Chinese living under poverty line. We can never afford reckless waste. Therefore, [10]it is no doubt that thrift is still a good virtue that we should not give up.　　亮點點評　　[1]不再。　　表示遞進。　　引出另外一種觀點。　　在下降。　　過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。　　用于引出自己的觀點或選擇。　　引用諺語儉以防匱。　　not but連接并列結(jié)構(gòu)，意為不是而是。　　現(xiàn)在分詞短語作后置定語。　　[10]毫無疑問。　　佳句臨摹　　佳句：Our natural resources are limited and some of them even are on the decline.　　臨摹：車禍使人們的財產(chǎn)遭受極大的損失，甚至還奪走了無數(shù)人的生命。　　___________________________________________________________________________.　　2.佳句：The truth of this saying is not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency.　　臨摹：我們永遠都不應該低估自己的能力，而應該相信一句諺語：有志者，事竟成。　　___________________________________________________________________________.　　KEY:　　Traffic accidents have caused great damages to peoples properties and even taken away thousands of peoples lives.　　2. We should never underestimate our abilities but should believe in the proverb: Where there is a will, there is a way.　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Dieting. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below:　　1）現(xiàn)在有越來越多人的選擇節(jié)食，有的人是為了健康，但是的人是為了有一個苗條的身材　　2）分析節(jié)食減肥可能帶來的影響　　3）你的建議　　On Dieting　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　行文思路　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現(xiàn)象并要求說明原因，提綱第2點要求分析這種現(xiàn)象可能帶來的影響，提綱第3點要求針對該現(xiàn)象提出我的建議，由此可判斷本文應為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內(nèi)容：描述越來越多的人節(jié)食的現(xiàn)象并分析主要原因;闡述節(jié)食不當可能帶來的影響;針對節(jié)食給出我的建議。　　高分范文　　On Dieting　　Nowadays more and more people are beginning to go on a diet. Some people are concerned with their health, and they go on a diet in order to lose unwanted weight. But still others, [1]especially the young women, are paying too much attention to their outward appearance. They become the leading numbers who go on a diet.　　However, dieting might bring great negative effects on people. For one thing, quite a lot of people dont really need dieting to keep health, and they diet just because they want to keep slim. For them, dieting not only is useless but also might damage their health. For another, some people lack enough knowledge on how to diet scientifically. As a result, they are likely to suffer from malnutrition.　　Considering the serious damage of unhealthy dieting, we should be cautious in dieting. In my opinion, dieting,for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance. Only with right guidance can dieting work as we expect.　　亮點點評　　[1]尤其，表示強調(diào)。　　成為主力軍。　　過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。　　用于引出對危害或負面影響的闡述。　　not only but also用于連接并列成分。　　考慮到，鑒于，介詞。　　不管因為什么原因，whatever意為無論什么。　　only+狀語位于句首，引起句子部分倒裝。　　像我們期望的那樣。　　佳句臨摹　　佳句：For them, dieting not only is useless but also might damage their health.　　臨摹：基因技術(shù)不僅使動植物受益而且還有助于提高人類的生活質(zhì)量。　　___________________________________________________________________________.　　2.佳句：In my opinion, dieting, for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance.　　臨摹： 無論你的目標是什么，你都必須通過誠實的勞動來實現(xiàn)它。　　___________________________________________________________________________.　　3.佳句：Only with right guidance can dieting work as we expect.　　臨摹：只有修滿足夠的學分，學生才能夠獲準畢業(yè)。　　___________________________________________________________________________.　　KEY:　　Genetic technology helps not only the plant and animals but also human beings to live a higher quality Whatever your aim is, you must worked honestly to attain it. Only when adequate credits have been achieved can students gain the qualification for graduation.