英語六級考前熱點高分范文九

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic What does Modern Science Bring us? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline below:　　1)科學究竟帶給我們什么?這個問題一直備受爭議　　2)很多人認為科學帶來了很多問題，比如污染、核武器　　3)你對此的看法是　　What Does Modern Science Bring us?　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　行文思路　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一個有爭議的話題，提綱第2點針對該話題提出一種反面觀點，提綱第3點要求談?wù)勎业目捶ǎ纱丝膳袛啾疚膽?yīng)為對比選擇型作文。　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出關(guān)于科學的爭議，簡單闡述科學帶來的問題;表明我對科學的正面看法，闡述科學帶給我們的好處;得出結(jié)論：科學發(fā)展利大于弊。　　高分范文　　What Does Modern Science Bring us?　　The question What does modern science bring us? has always [1]provoked great debate. Some people argue that science should [2]been responsible for pollution and has brought us the nuclear bomb that threatens our existence. [3]In addition, they point out that cloning has shaken the foundation of moral codes.　　[3]However, [4]compared with the negative aspects, [5]I think, the blessing of science is more evident. As we see, the vast improvements made in the field of medicine have served to lengthen our life expectancy and to reduce the rate of infant morality. [3]Whats more, the discovery of mechanization, better seeds, better technique of irrigation and pest control has worked to increase the productivity levels on farms. As to transportation, the railway, modern ocean liner, jet plane, and motor vehicles have made our lives more comfortable and convenient, [6]as well as provide more chances for commercial and industrial development. [3]Besides, the invention of the computer has assisted a lot in our life and work.　　[3]In general, [7]the advantages of science far outweigh its disadvantages. And in most cases, [8]it is not science itself but human beings misuse of it that brings us undesirable results. [3]Therefore, [9]it is no doubt that we should continue developing science and [10]take full advantage of it.　　【亮點點評】　　[1]引起極大的爭議。　　[2]對負責，是的原因。　　[3]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。　　[4]與相比，過去分詞短語作狀語。　　[5]插入語。　　[6]也，還，表示并列。　　[7]利大于弊。　　[8]強調(diào)句型，此處強調(diào)的是notbut連接的并列主語。　　[9]毫無疑問。　　[10]充分利用。　　佳句臨摹　　1.佳句：Compared with the negative aspects, I think, the blessing of science is more evident.　　臨摹：我認為，與傳統(tǒng)的字典相比，電子字典攜帶和使用起來更加方便。　　___________________________________________________________________________.　　2.佳句：Motor vehicles have made our lives more comfortable and convenient, as well as provide more chances for commercial and industrial development.　　臨摹：了解一個人，我們可以看他交什么樣的朋友，也可以看他讀什么樣的書。　　___________________________________________________________________________.　　3.佳句：It is not science itself but human beings misuse of it that brings us undesirable results.　　臨摹：一個人的成功不是取決于他的外貌而是取決于他的能力。　　___________________________________________________________________________.　　【KEY】　　1. Compared with traditional dictionaries, I think, electronic dictionaries are more convenient to carry and use.　　2. A man may usually be known by the books he reads as well as by the company he keeps.　　3. It is not ones appearance but his capability that decides his final success.

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic What does Modern Science Bring us? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline below:　　1)科學究竟帶給我們什么?這個問題一直備受爭議　　2)很多人認為科學帶來了很多問題，比如污染、核武器　　3)你對此的看法是　　What Does Modern Science Bring us?　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　_______________________________________________________________________________　　行文思路　　本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一個有爭議的話題，提綱第2點針對該話題提出一種反面觀點，提綱第3點要求談?wù)勎业目捶ǎ纱丝膳袛啾疚膽?yīng)為對比選擇型作文。　　根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出關(guān)于科學的爭議，簡單闡述科學帶來的問題;表明我對科學的正面看法，闡述科學帶給我們的好處;得出結(jié)論：科學發(fā)展利大于弊。　　高分范文　　What Does Modern Science Bring us?　　The question What does modern science bring us? has always [1]provoked great debate. Some people argue that science should [2]been responsible for pollution and has brought us the nuclear bomb that threatens our existence. [3]In addition, they point out that cloning has shaken the foundation of moral codes.　　[3]However, [4]compared with the negative aspects, [5]I think, the blessing of science is more evident. As we see, the vast improvements made in the field of medicine have served to lengthen our life expectancy and to reduce the rate of infant morality. [3]Whats more, the discovery of mechanization, better seeds, better technique of irrigation and pest control has worked to increase the productivity levels on farms. As to transportation, the railway, modern ocean liner, jet plane, and motor vehicles have made our lives more comfortable and convenient, [6]as well as provide more chances for commercial and industrial development. [3]Besides, the invention of the computer has assisted a lot in our life and work.　　[3]In general, [7]the advantages of science far outweigh its disadvantages. And in most cases, [8]it is not science itself but human beings misuse of it that brings us undesirable results. [3]Therefore, [9]it is no doubt that we should continue developing science and [10]take full advantage of it.　　【亮點點評】　　[1]引起極大的爭議。　　[2]對負責，是的原因。　　[3]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密。　　[4]與相比，過去分詞短語作狀語。　　[5]插入語。　　[6]也，還，表示并列。　　[7]利大于弊。　　[8]強調(diào)句型，此處強調(diào)的是notbut連接的并列主語。　　[9]毫無疑問。　　[10]充分利用。　　佳句臨摹　　1.佳句：Compared with the negative aspects, I think, the blessing of science is more evident.　　臨摹：我認為，與傳統(tǒng)的字典相比，電子字典攜帶和使用起來更加方便。　　___________________________________________________________________________.　　2.佳句：Motor vehicles have made our lives more comfortable and convenient, as well as provide more chances for commercial and industrial development.　　臨摹：了解一個人，我們可以看他交什么樣的朋友，也可以看他讀什么樣的書。　　___________________________________________________________________________.　　3.佳句：It is not science itself but human beings misuse of it that brings us undesirable results.　　臨摹：一個人的成功不是取決于他的外貌而是取決于他的能力。　　___________________________________________________________________________.　　【KEY】　　1. Compared with traditional dictionaries, I think, electronic dictionaries are more convenient to carry and use.　　2. A man may usually be known by the books he reads as well as by the company he keeps.　　3. It is not ones appearance but his capability that decides his final success.