鄭州市 2024高考英語短文改錯(cuò)、書面表達(dá)一輪訓(xùn)練（10）附參考范文

　　(201*·鄭州質(zhì)檢)

　　We all know that healthy is very important to us. Both1.________

　　study and work depend by strong bodies. Doing sports2.________

　　and games helps us keep strong and healthy. If we do not3.________

　　take any exercise, we may feel tired but get sick easily.4.________

　　There's many different kinds of sports we can do them，5.________

　　such as playing ball games, running, walking and swim.6.________

　　However, now we have too much homework to do in7.________

　　every day. We hope that we'll be giving less homework8.________

　　and have more time take part in sports. We also hope9.________

　　that our school can hold a sports meeting every term. 10.________

　　答案與解析：

　　1．healthy→health　這里是句子的主語，因此用名詞形式。

　　2．by→on/upon　depend on/upon是固定搭配。

　　3．help→helps　這句話的主語是動(dòng)名詞短語doing sports and games。動(dòng)名詞短語作主語表示一件事時(shí)，謂語動(dòng)詞用第三人稱單數(shù)形式。

　　4．but→and　feel tired和get sick是并列關(guān)系，不表示轉(zhuǎn)折，因此將but改為and。

　　5．去掉them　這是一個(gè)定語從句，從句中作動(dòng)詞do的賓語的關(guān)系代詞that(或which)被省略了，因此them是多余的。

　　6．swim→swimming　應(yīng)用動(dòng)名詞與前面的running，walking并列，故應(yīng)用swimming。

　　7．去掉in　every day可以單獨(dú)作狀語，前面不需要加介詞。

　　8．giving→given　這里是被動(dòng)語態(tài)，因此用過去分詞。

　　9．take前加to　此處考查的是have time to do sth.的結(jié)構(gòu)。

　　10．√ (2)(25 min.)

　　(2024·瀏陽一中月考)假如你是中學(xué)生李華。在一位名叫WolfDad的學(xué)生家長的博客上，你看到如下內(nèi)容。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容、寫作要點(diǎn)和要求，給這位家長回復(fù)。

　　I'm the father of a fourteen-year-old boy. I have a rule for my son: be among the top 3 students or get punished in one way or another. He has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on him. Am I wrong?

　　寫作要點(diǎn)：

　　1. 表明自己的看法；

　　2. 陳述自己的理由(可舉例說明)；

　　3. 提出至少兩條建議。

　　寫作要求：

　　1. 短文字?jǐn)?shù)不少于120(不含已寫好的部分)；

　　2. 內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫；

　　3. 書寫須清晰、工整。

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　　【參考范文】One possible version：

　　Hi, WolfDad,

　　What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.

　　Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, health and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.

　　So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly, let him live like a lovely boy; let him have more friends and social activities; and let him make mistakes of his own as we teenagers often do.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　*******************************************************結(jié)束

　　鄭州市 2024高考英語短文改錯(cuò)、書面表達(dá)一輪訓(xùn)練（10）附參考范文

　　(201*·鄭州質(zhì)檢)

　　We all know that healthy is very important to us. Both1.________

　　study and work depend by strong bodies. Doing sports2.________

　　and games helps us keep strong and healthy. If we do not3.________

　　take any exercise, we may feel tired but get sick easily.4.________

　　There's many different kinds of sports we can do them，5.________

　　such as playing ball games, running, walking and swim.6.________

　　However, now we have too much homework to do in7.________

　　every day. We hope that we'll be giving less homework8.________

　　and have more time take part in sports. We also hope9.________

　　that our school can hold a sports meeting every term. 10.________

　　答案與解析：

　　1．healthy→health　這里是句子的主語，因此用名詞形式。

　　2．by→on/upon　depend on/upon是固定搭配。

　　3．help→helps　這句話的主語是動(dòng)名詞短語doing sports and games。動(dòng)名詞短語作主語表示一件事時(shí)，謂語動(dòng)詞用第三人稱單數(shù)形式。

　　4．but→and　feel tired和get sick是并列關(guān)系，不表示轉(zhuǎn)折，因此將but改為and。

　　5．去掉them　這是一個(gè)定語從句，從句中作動(dòng)詞do的賓語的關(guān)系代詞that(或which)被省略了，因此them是多余的。

　　6．swim→swimming　應(yīng)用動(dòng)名詞與前面的running，walking并列，故應(yīng)用swimming。

　　7．去掉in　every day可以單獨(dú)作狀語，前面不需要加介詞。

　　8．giving→given　這里是被動(dòng)語態(tài)，因此用過去分詞。

　　9．take前加to　此處考查的是have time to do sth.的結(jié)構(gòu)。

　　10．√ (2)(25 min.)

　　(2024·瀏陽一中月考)假如你是中學(xué)生李華。在一位名叫WolfDad的學(xué)生家長的博客上，你看到如下內(nèi)容。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容、寫作要點(diǎn)和要求，給這位家長回復(fù)。

　　I'm the father of a fourteen-year-old boy. I have a rule for my son: be among the top 3 students or get punished in one way or another. He has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on him. Am I wrong?

　　寫作要點(diǎn)：

　　1. 表明自己的看法；

　　2. 陳述自己的理由(可舉例說明)；

　　3. 提出至少兩條建議。

　　寫作要求：

　　1. 短文字?jǐn)?shù)不少于120(不含已寫好的部分)；

　　2. 內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫；

　　3. 書寫須清晰、工整。

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　【參考范文】One possible version：

　　Hi, WolfDad,

　　What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.

　　Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, health and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.

　　So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly, let him live like a lovely boy; let him have more friends and social activities; and let him make mistakes of his own as we teenagers often do.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　*******************************************************結(jié)束