揭陽市2024高考英語短文改錯、書面表達一輪訓練（9）附參考范文
揭陽市2024高考英語短文改錯、書面表達一輪訓練（9）附參考范文
(201*石家莊質檢)
I am a very active girl in my class. I have many hobby，1.________
such as writing stories, playing piano and singing English2.________
songs. My most favorite subject is English.
I became3.________
interested in it when I was very young. My dream is 4.________
to study abroad. But now I need to improve my English5.________
and learn more about west culture as well. I will be6.________
able to improving the friendship between China and7.________
the rest of the world. I hoped my dream will come true.8.________
And I believe in nobody can change my mind. I will work9.________
harder and follow my heart, no matter how happens！10.________
答案與解析：
1．hobby→hobbies many后接復數名詞，下文such as后列舉的內容也是提示。
2．piano前加the play the piano表示“彈鋼琴”，是固定搭配。西洋樂器類名詞前常用定冠詞the。
3．去掉most favorite本身就是“最喜愛的”，因此原句語義重復。
4．√
5．But→So 前后邏輯上是因果而不是轉折關系。
6．west→western 依據語境這里表示“西方文化”，應用形容詞western作定語。
7．improving→improve be able to do sth.表示“能夠做某事”。
8．hoped→hope 這里表示說話人現在的愿望，故應用一般現在時。
9．去掉in I believe that..我相信……。believe in表示“信任，信仰”，其后不能接從句。
10．how→what no matter what happens無論發生什么，what充當從句的主語。
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作文（***）
今年5月31日是第21個世界無煙日，英文21世紀報計劃舉辦一次征艾比賽，主
1．絕大部分青少年吸煙者認為暖姻藍禧粳酷，氆禾套馬上對身體產生危害，只要
2．請你駁斥這種觀點，應包含以下信息：吸煙浪費金錢，渾身氣味，牙齒骯臟，上癮
3．提出一些幫助人們戒煙的建議(至少60詞)。
注意：詞數120～150，文章標題已繪出，不計入總詞數。
Smoking is Not Cool and Quit NowOne possible version：
Smoking is Not Cool and Quit Now
Most young smokers say smoking is cool and doesn’t hurt us fight now．People can just stop before it gets dangerous．
But in my opinion，smoking is not cool at all．In addition to the waste of money，smoking makes you smell bad and makes your teeth dirty．Being addicted to cigarettes will poison your bedy with cancer causing by—products．Dying of lung and heart disease or cancer won’t promote your popularityDon’t quit until it's too late-smoking begins to damage your body the moment you start．
To quit you should first set a date and quit COMPLETELY on that day．Then find out the times you are most likely to smoke and make a plan about what you'll do instead of smoking at those times．For example，take a walk when feeling stressed．Take exercise to resist the desire to smoke．Let your friends give you a help reminding you if necessary．
2．可適當增加細節，以使文章連貫。
3．信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear Peter，
I'm
glad to learn that you and your family are coming to settle down in China．
Nevertheless，this is only my suggestion and it's up to you to decide．Hope to hear from you again．
Yours，
Hua
One possible version：
May l7,20 Dear Peter,．
’m so glad to learn that you and your family are coming to settle down in China．After a careful study of the information about the two cities，I suggest you choose to live in City A．First of all，the climate in City A is more pleasant than that in City B．As we all know，good climate will benefit our health．Besides．there are many places for entertainment where you can enjoy yourselves in your spare time．After all，both cities are almost equally favorable in safety．As for the employment，though the job opportunities are not so good as those in City B，yet I don’t think it’s a problem for you as a teacher of English．If I should choose， would live in City A．
Nevertheless,this is only my suggestion and it's up to you to decide．Hope to hear from youn．
Yours
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(201*·成都檢測)
My father and I am taking a camping trip in July1.________
and August. We will travel for about two months but2.________
will tour the United States and parts of the Canada. We3.__ ______
have decided to camp because it does not spend as much4.________
as vacationing in hotels, but we had to plan carefully. I5.________
think the car what we are going to drive is very small, so6.________
we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them7.________
and as few camping things as possibly. We will take some8.________
medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us, and also9.________
some food for picnics. I'm sure that we will have fun.10.________
答案與解析：
1．am→are 本句的主句是my father and I，所以謂語動詞用復數形式。
2．but→and 此處表示的是順承關系，而不是轉折關系。
3．刪去第二個the 一般情況下，表示國家的單個詞語前不加冠詞。
4．spend→cost 本句的主語不是人，而是it，所以用cost。
5．had→have 短文全篇敘述的都是現在和將來的情況。
6．what→that/which或刪去what “that/which we are going to drive”是定語從句，修飾先行詞the car，關系代詞在從句中作賓語，可以省略。
7．them→us 根據文章的開頭部分可知這里指的是作者本人和作者的父親，因此應用us。
8．possibly→possible as...as possible表示“盡可能……”。
9．prevent前加to 此處是不定式短語作目的狀語。
10．√
作文（***）
最近你校對中學生消費情況進行了調查；請根據調查表提供的信息寫一篇英語短左右。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
參考答案：
One possible version：
As can be seen from the diagram above，nowadays middle sch．ool students spend most of their pocket money on snacks，clothes，things for entertainment and social communication．However，they seldom buy learning resources．Furthermoreme of them are free to buy whatever they like without considering the income of their family and their needs．
In my opinion，it's wrong of us students to consume blindly．such as following the fashion，pursuing famous brands of clothes,As we know，once seeking material comforts，we will lose the motivation of learnin．Therefore，we should spend our pocket money on what we really need．Als，we should acquire a scientific outlook of consumption and focus on study．What's more，it's essential for us to develop a
habit of saving money．
(201*·河南五校聯考)
After I finished the school this year, I began to1.________
look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________
found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3.________
I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4.________
He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________
studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________
his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.________
will go through the job-hunting talk today and he would8.________
take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________
what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10.________
答案與解析：
1．去掉the finish school是固定搭配，表示“畢業”。
2．month→months month是可數名詞，several暗示應用復數形式。
3．interested后加in be interested in是固定搭配，表示“對……感興趣”。
4．him→himself calling himself Mr. Smith短語作定語，修飾a man表示“自稱Mr. Smith”的男子。
5．do→did 根據邏輯可知這里表示畢業前的情況，故用一般過去時。do well in“干得好”。
6．√
7．beaten→beating a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。
8．will→would 這里應考慮主從句時態的呼應，故用過去將來時。
9．surprised→surprise to one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人驚訝的是”。
10．said后加was what he said是主語從句，“他的話是令人失望的”。句子缺少系動詞。
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揭陽市2024高考英語短文改錯、書面表達一輪訓練（9）附參考范文
(201*石家莊質檢)
I am a very active girl in my class. I have many hobby，1.________
such as writing stories, playing piano and singing English2.________
songs. My most favorite subject is English.
I became3.________
interested in it when I was very young. My dream is 4.________
to study abroad. But now I need to improve my English5.________
and learn more about west culture as well. I will be6.________
able to improving the friendship between China and7.________
the rest of the world. I hoped my dream will come true.8.________
And I believe in nobody can change my mind. I will work9.________
harder and follow my heart, no matter how happens！10.________
答案與解析：
1．hobby→hobbies many后接復數名詞，下文such as后列舉的內容也是提示。
2．piano前加the play the piano表示“彈鋼琴”，是固定搭配。西洋樂器類名詞前常用定冠詞the。
3．去掉most favorite本身就是“最喜愛的”，因此原句語義重復。
4．√
5．But→So 前后邏輯上是因果而不是轉折關系。
6．west→western 依據語境這里表示“西方文化”，應用形容詞western作定語。
7．improving→improve be able to do sth.表示“能夠做某事”。
8．hoped→hope 這里表示說話人現在的愿望，故應用一般現在時。
9．去掉in I believe that..我相信……。believe in表示“信任，信仰”，其后不能接從句。
10．how→what no matter what happens無論發生什么，what充當從句的主語。
*******************************************************結束
作文（***）
今年5月31日是第21個世界無煙日，英文21世紀報計劃舉辦一次征艾比賽，主
1．絕大部分青少年吸煙者認為暖姻藍禧粳酷，氆禾套馬上對身體產生危害，只要
2．請你駁斥這種觀點，應包含以下信息：吸煙浪費金錢，渾身氣味，牙齒骯臟，上癮
3．提出一些幫助人們戒煙的建議(至少60詞)。
注意：詞數120～150，文章標題已繪出，不計入總詞數。
Smoking is Not Cool and Quit NowOne possible version：
Smoking is Not Cool and Quit Now
Most young smokers say smoking is cool and doesn’t hurt us fight now．People can just stop before it gets dangerous．
But in my opinion，smoking is not cool at all．In addition to the waste of money，smoking makes you smell bad and makes your teeth dirty．Being addicted to cigarettes will poison your bedy with cancer causing by—products．Dying of lung and heart disease or cancer won’t promote your popularityDon’t quit until it's too late-smoking begins to damage your body the moment you start．
To quit you should first set a date and quit COMPLETELY on that day．Then find out the times you are most likely to smoke and make a plan about what you'll do instead of smoking at those times．For example，take a walk when feeling stressed．Take exercise to resist the desire to smoke．Let your friends give you a help reminding you if necessary．
2．可適當增加細節，以使文章連貫。
3．信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear Peter，
I'm
glad to learn that you and your family are coming to settle down in China．
Nevertheless，this is only my suggestion and it's up to you to decide．Hope to hear from you again．
Yours，
Hua
One possible version：
May l7,20 Dear Peter,．
’m so glad to learn that you and your family are coming to settle down in China．After a careful study of the information about the two cities，I suggest you choose to live in City A．First of all，the climate in City A is more pleasant than that in City B．As we all know，good climate will benefit our health．Besides．there are many places for entertainment where you can enjoy yourselves in your spare time．After all，both cities are almost equally favorable in safety．As for the employment，though the job opportunities are not so good as those in City B，yet I don’t think it’s a problem for you as a teacher of English．If I should choose， would live in City A．
Nevertheless,this is only my suggestion and it's up to you to decide．Hope to hear from youn．
Yours
**************************************************************結束
(201*·成都檢測)
My father and I am taking a camping trip in July1.________
and August. We will travel for about two months but2.________
will tour the United States and parts of the Canada. We3.__ ______
have decided to camp because it does not spend as much4.________
as vacationing in hotels, but we had to plan carefully. I5.________
think the car what we are going to drive is very small, so6.________
we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them7.________
and as few camping things as possibly. We will take some8.________
medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us, and also9.________
some food for picnics. I'm sure that we will have fun.10.________
答案與解析：
1．am→are 本句的主句是my father and I，所以謂語動詞用復數形式。
2．but→and 此處表示的是順承關系，而不是轉折關系。
3．刪去第二個the 一般情況下，表示國家的單個詞語前不加冠詞。
4．spend→cost 本句的主語不是人，而是it，所以用cost。
5．had→have 短文全篇敘述的都是現在和將來的情況。
6．what→that/which或刪去what “that/which we are going to drive”是定語從句，修飾先行詞the car，關系代詞在從句中作賓語，可以省略。
7．them→us 根據文章的開頭部分可知這里指的是作者本人和作者的父親，因此應用us。
8．possibly→possible as...as possible表示“盡可能……”。
9．prevent前加to 此處是不定式短語作目的狀語。
10．√
作文（***）
最近你校對中學生消費情況進行了調查；請根據調查表提供的信息寫一篇英語短左右。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
參考答案：
One possible version：
As can be seen from the diagram above，nowadays middle sch．ool students spend most of their pocket money on snacks，clothes，things for entertainment and social communication．However，they seldom buy learning resources．Furthermoreme of them are free to buy whatever they like without considering the income of their family and their needs．
In my opinion，it's wrong of us students to consume blindly．such as following the fashion，pursuing famous brands of clothes,As we know，once seeking material comforts，we will lose the motivation of learnin．Therefore，we should spend our pocket money on what we really need．Als，we should acquire a scientific outlook of consumption and focus on study．What's more，it's essential for us to develop a
habit of saving money．
(201*·河南五校聯考)
After I finished the school this year, I began to1.________
look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________
found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3.________
I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4.________
He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________
studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________
his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.________
will go through the job-hunting talk today and he would8.________
take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________
what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10.________
答案與解析：
1．去掉the finish school是固定搭配，表示“畢業”。
2．month→months month是可數名詞，several暗示應用復數形式。
3．interested后加in be interested in是固定搭配，表示“對……感興趣”。
4．him→himself calling himself Mr. Smith短語作定語，修飾a man表示“自稱Mr. Smith”的男子。
5．do→did 根據邏輯可知這里表示畢業前的情況，故用一般過去時。do well in“干得好”。
6．√
7．beaten→beating a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。
8．will→would 這里應考慮主從句時態的呼應，故用過去將來時。
9．surprised→surprise to one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人驚訝的是”。
10．said后加was what he said是主語從句，“他的話是令人失望的”。句子缺少系動詞。
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