浙江永嘉縣2024高考英語短文改錯（二輪）精練題（3）及參考答案

　　【2024四川省資陽市第一次診斷性考試】

　　短文改錯 （共10小題；每小題分，滿分分）

　　文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加在缺詞處加一個漏字符號并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除把多余的詞用斜線）劃掉。

　　修改在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意

　　1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者從第11處起不計分。

　　Dear Editor,I used to be a happy little girl and now I’m shy and say a few words.

　　When I was eleven, I lost one of the front teeth and it replaced by a false one. No one

　　knows about it except two of my friend. However, I found it hard to face them because they

　　know my secret. When I speak at them, they often stare at my mouth, what makes me feel

　　uneasy. I am afraid of make new friends as I think they will laugh at me. Sometime I even want

　　to kill me indeed. What should I do?

　　Li Hua

　　【參考答案】

　　Dear Editor,

　　I used to be a happy little girl and now I’m shy and say a few words.

　　but

　　When I was eleven, I lost one of the front teeth and it ∧ replaced by a false one. No one

　　was

　　knows about it except two of my friend. However, I found it hard to face them because they

　　friends

　　find

　　know my secret. When I speak at them, they often stare at my mouth, what makes me feel

　　to

　　which

　　uneasy. I am afraid of make new friends as I think they will laugh at me. Sometime I even want

　　making

　　Sometimes

　　to kill me indeed. What should I do?

　　myself

　　二、評分意見

　　1. 未標注符號或符號標注不規范一律不給分2. 答題位置（需修改的詞下方或需添加位置的下方）不對（如答在上方或相距甚遠的位置）一律不給分。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。I went to the Summer Palace last week．At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists．I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat．I got know that they were college students traveling in China．Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine．They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years．After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time ．We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in future．They thanked us again and again．I was very glad to have chance to praticing my oral English．

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Three years ago, I became a student in an ordinary school． Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I find the teachers patient and considerate． However, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class． I decided to make the best for it． I worked hardly and got along well with teachers and classmates． Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available． Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated．

　　My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determine who you are．

　　3.

　　1.disappointing—disappointed

　　2． find—found

　　3.However—Besides或Also

　　4． for—of

　　5.hardly—hard

　　6． teachers 前加my或the

　　7.student—students

　　8． what—which

　　9.去掉but后的that

　　10． determine—determines

　　此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在答題卡相應的位置上萄一個勾(、／)；如有錯誤(每行只有一個錯誤)，則按下列情況改正：此行多—個詞：把多余的詞寫在答題卡相應的位置上，用斜線(、)劃掉·

　　此行缺—個詞：在答題卡相應的位置上寫出該加的詞，并附帶前(后)詞·此行話一個詞：在答題卡相應的位置上寫出該錯詞和改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。

　　I was a honest child indeed. I didn’t dare to tell lies.

　　1.

　　because of my eyes often let the secret out. I remembered 2.

　　telling a lie to my parents, and I could hard fix my eyes on

　　3.

　　my father’s face, to let alone my mother’s eyes. I glanced

　　4.

　　here and there, up and down, nervously.

　　5.

　　However, after I came to Beijing, I no longer have to

　　6.

　　worry my nervous eyes because everything I wanted to say

　　7.

　　was sent by letter. I found myself often tell small lies. I wrote

　　8.

　　“I’m well in Beijing. I enjoy the food selling at the university.

　　9.

　　And at weekends, I often buy fried chickens or pork to eat.”

　　10.

　　【參考答案】4.

　　1.a honest child改為an honest child .because of改為because

　　.hard改為hardly .To let改為let

　　.√

　　6.have to 改為had to.worry改為worry about

　　8.tell改為telling .selling改為sold

　　.chickens改為chicken

　　2. 只允許修改10處, 多者 ( 從第11處起 ) 不計分。

　　例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I

　　the

　　was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday.

　　am

　　on

　　Nowadays，people in many big cities are complaining the heavy traffic. It has serious influenced people daily life and economic development. To solve the problem，some pieces

　　of advice is put forward. Some people suggest that more streets and roads are built. By this

　　way，the traffic density can be speeding up the flow of buses and cars.

　　Some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars. This can decrease the traffic

　　flow. But on the other hand, this will effect the consumption and makes buses more crowded.

　　In my opinion，the number of private cars should be put under control. And at the same time，buses should have their own special routes cannot be used by other vehicles.?

　　【參考答案】改錯（共10分）

　　Nowadays，people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. It has seriously influenced people’s daily life and economic development. To solve the problemsome pieces of advice are put forward. Some people suggest that more streets and roads should be built. In this way，the traffic density can be

　　speeding up the flow of buses and cars.

　　Some people advise limit the number of bikes and cars. This can decrease the traffic flow. But on the other hand，this will affect the consumption and make buses more crowded.

　　In my opinion，the number of private cars should be put under control. And at the same time，buses should have their own special routes which cannot be used by other vehicles.?

　　浙江永嘉縣2024高考英語短文改錯（二輪）精練題（3）及參考答案

　　【2024四川省資陽市第一次診斷性考試】

　　短文改錯 （共10小題；每小題分，滿分分）

　　文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加在缺詞處加一個漏字符號并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除把多余的詞用斜線）劃掉。

　　修改在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意

　　1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者從第11處起不計分。

　　Dear Editor,I used to be a happy little girl and now I’m shy and say a few words.

　　When I was eleven, I lost one of the front teeth and it replaced by a false one. No one

　　knows about it except two of my friend. However, I found it hard to face them because they

　　know my secret. When I speak at them, they often stare at my mouth, what makes me feel

　　uneasy. I am afraid of make new friends as I think they will laugh at me. Sometime I even want

　　to kill me indeed. What should I do?

　　Li Hua

　　【參考答案】

　　Dear Editor,

　　I used to be a happy little girl and now I’m shy and say a few words.

　　but

　　When I was eleven, I lost one of the front teeth and it ∧ replaced by a false one. No one

　　was

　　knows about it except two of my friend. However, I found it hard to face them because they

　　friends

　　find

　　know my secret. When I speak at them, they often stare at my mouth, what makes me feel

　　to

　　which

　　uneasy. I am afraid of make new friends as I think they will laugh at me. Sometime I even want

　　making

　　Sometimes

　　to kill me indeed. What should I do?

　　myself

　　二、評分意見

　　1. 未標注符號或符號標注不規范一律不給分2. 答題位置（需修改的詞下方或需添加位置的下方）不對（如答在上方或相距甚遠的位置）一律不給分。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。I went to the Summer Palace last week．At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists．I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat．I got know that they were college students traveling in China．Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine．They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years．After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time ．We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in future．They thanked us again and again．I was very glad to have chance to praticing my oral English．

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Three years ago, I became a student in an ordinary school． Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I find the teachers patient and considerate． However, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class． I decided to make the best for it． I worked hardly and got along well with teachers and classmates． Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available． Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated．

　　My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determine who you are．

　　3.

　　1.disappointing—disappointed

　　2． find—found

　　3.However—Besides或Also

　　4． for—of

　　5.hardly—hard

　　6． teachers 前加my或the

　　7.student—students

　　8． what—which

　　9.去掉but后的that

　　10． determine—determines

　　此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在答題卡相應的位置上萄一個勾(、／)；如有錯誤(每行只有一個錯誤)，則按下列情況改正：此行多—個詞：把多余的詞寫在答題卡相應的位置上，用斜線(、)劃掉·

　　此行缺—個詞：在答題卡相應的位置上寫出該加的詞，并附帶前(后)詞·此行話一個詞：在答題卡相應的位置上寫出該錯詞和改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。

　　I was a honest child indeed. I didn’t dare to tell lies.

　　1.

　　because of my eyes often let the secret out. I remembered 2.

　　telling a lie to my parents, and I could hard fix my eyes on

　　3.

　　my father’s face, to let alone my mother’s eyes. I glanced

　　4.

　　here and there, up and down, nervously.

　　5.

　　However, after I came to Beijing, I no longer have to

　　6.

　　worry my nervous eyes because everything I wanted to say

　　7.

　　was sent by letter. I found myself often tell small lies. I wrote

　　8.

　　“I’m well in Beijing. I enjoy the food selling at the university.

　　9.

　　And at weekends, I often buy fried chickens or pork to eat.”

　　10.

　　【參考答案】4.

　　1.a honest child改為an honest child .because of改為because

　　.hard改為hardly .To let改為let

　　.√

　　6.have to 改為had to.worry改為worry about

　　8.tell改為telling .selling改為sold

　　.chickens改為chicken

　　2. 只允許修改10處, 多者 ( 從第11處起 ) 不計分。

　　例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I

　　the

　　was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday.

　　am

　　on

　　Nowadays，people in many big cities are complaining the heavy traffic. It has serious influenced people daily life and economic development. To solve the problem，some pieces

　　of advice is put forward. Some people suggest that more streets and roads are built. By this

　　way，the traffic density can be speeding up the flow of buses and cars.

　　Some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars. This can decrease the traffic

　　flow. But on the other hand, this will effect the consumption and makes buses more crowded.

　　In my opinion，the number of private cars should be put under control. And at the same time，buses should have their own special routes cannot be used by other vehicles.?

　　【參考答案】改錯（共10分）

　　Nowadays，people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. It has seriously influenced people’s daily life and economic development. To solve the problemsome pieces of advice are put forward. Some people suggest that more streets and roads should be built. In this way，the traffic density can be

　　speeding up the flow of buses and cars.

　　Some people advise limit the number of bikes and cars. This can decrease the traffic flow. But on the other hand，this will affect the consumption and make buses more crowded.

　　In my opinion，the number of private cars should be put under control. And at the same time，buses should have their own special routes which cannot be used by other vehicles.?