安徽蕪湖市2024高考英語書面表達【二輪】選析（6）及參考范文

　　2024書面表達訓練

　　學生會將舉辦一次以“校園生活創意無限”(Innovation on Campus)為主題的創意作品展評活動。

　　請根據以下內容，用英語寫一份書面通知。

　　Notice .

　　In order to enrich your life after school and provide you with a chance to show your talents, we have decided to hold an exciting event “Innovations on Campus”. Note that your works must be school things and created by yourselves. Along with your wonderful works, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use. All the collections will be on show from May 3 to 9 in the gym, the top 10 of which will be awarded. So don't miss the chance and for any questions, call Li Hua at 88235791.

　　Come on, everybody! It's your show time.

　　【2024界虹口區質量監控測試題】Guided Writing

　　Directions: Write an English composition in 120 – 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

　　請認真觀察下面的漫畫，然后簡要描述漫畫內容，并根據你對該漫畫的理解，談談自己的思考和看法。

　　參考詞匯：缸vat；

　　漏出來leak out；

　　漏洞loophole

　　【參考范文】作文：

　　In the picture, four people are trying to fill a vat with water. Two men are carrying water while two others are pouring water into the vat. However, with so many loopholes at the bottom of the vat, they’ll never store any water, because no one tries to mend the holes.

　　It reminds me of the problems in our study. While studying, we always try to read more books and do more exercises. However, we seldom pay attention to the mistakes we’ve made, nor do we try to correct them. Therefore, “holes” are left. Day by day, the “holes”, or rather the shortages, become more and more. No matter how many books we’ve read, we have never mastered any knowledge. They have leaked out because of the hole.

　　So we should pay attention to the mistakes we’ve made and the holes we have in our study. Only in this way can we learn much knowledge and fill up our mind with it.

　　（2024浙江卷 ）

　　學校圖書館需要購置一批新書， 現向學生征求意見。假如你是李越，你認為學校圖書館最需要購置科普類圖書（popular science books）和文學類圖書（literary books）。請你用英語給圖書館王老師寫一封100—120詞的信，推薦這兩類書，并分別說明推薦理由。

　　注意：信的抬頭與落款已給出（不計入詞數）。

　　Dear Mr. Wang,

　　_______________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Yue

　　【考點】考察應用文寫作

　　【寫作指導】

　　本文屬于應用文中的書信，所以需要注意書信的特殊格式以及特殊用語。要求以李越的口吻向圖書館王老師推薦科普類圖書（popular science books）和文學類圖書（literary books）。要點：1.你向王老師推薦這兩類書。2.理由：科普類圖書幫助我們理解科技的基本原則，引起我們的好奇心和發展意識。文學類的書可以提高我們的文學素養。鼓勵我們批判類的思維。

　　本文對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

　　【一句多譯】

　　那就是我我推薦另外一種書：文學作品。如古典文學，大師作品。通過精彩的故事和語言呈現偉大的思想。

　　（1）That is why I recommend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language.

　　（2）That is the reason

　　why I recommend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language.

　　【參考范文】

　　Dear Mr. Wang,

　　Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.

　　What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.

　　In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.

　　I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Yue

　　書面表達（滿分2分）’m Li Hua from Fujian.

　　I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【參考范文】

　　Dear Sir,

　　I’m Li Hua from Fujian, When I was reading the advertisement, the aim of this activity impressed me greatly. I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. It is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation.

　　As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, good at English and have experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12. I think it is a kind of win-win activity. For one thing, I can help take care of the children. For another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.

　　I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　安徽蕪湖市2024高考英語書面表達【二輪】選析（6）及參考范文

　　2024書面表達訓練

　　學生會將舉辦一次以“校園生活創意無限”(Innovation on Campus)為主題的創意作品展評活動。

　　請根據以下內容，用英語寫一份書面通知。

　　Notice .

　　In order to enrich your life after school and provide you with a chance to show your talents, we have decided to hold an exciting event “Innovations on Campus”. Note that your works must be school things and created by yourselves. Along with your wonderful works, you need to hand in a report, explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use. All the collections will be on show from May 3 to 9 in the gym, the top 10 of which will be awarded. So don't miss the chance and for any questions, call Li Hua at 88235791.

　　Come on, everybody! It's your show time.

　　【2024界虹口區質量監控測試題】Guided Writing

　　Directions: Write an English composition in 120 – 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

　　請認真觀察下面的漫畫，然后簡要描述漫畫內容，并根據你對該漫畫的理解，談談自己的思考和看法。

　　參考詞匯：缸vat；

　　漏出來leak out；

　　漏洞loophole

　　【參考范文】作文：

　　In the picture, four people are trying to fill a vat with water. Two men are carrying water while two others are pouring water into the vat. However, with so many loopholes at the bottom of the vat, they’ll never store any water, because no one tries to mend the holes.

　　It reminds me of the problems in our study. While studying, we always try to read more books and do more exercises. However, we seldom pay attention to the mistakes we’ve made, nor do we try to correct them. Therefore, “holes” are left. Day by day, the “holes”, or rather the shortages, become more and more. No matter how many books we’ve read, we have never mastered any knowledge. They have leaked out because of the hole.

　　So we should pay attention to the mistakes we’ve made and the holes we have in our study. Only in this way can we learn much knowledge and fill up our mind with it.

　　（2024浙江卷 ）

　　學校圖書館需要購置一批新書， 現向學生征求意見。假如你是李越，你認為學校圖書館最需要購置科普類圖書（popular science books）和文學類圖書（literary books）。請你用英語給圖書館王老師寫一封100—120詞的信，推薦這兩類書，并分別說明推薦理由。

　　注意：信的抬頭與落款已給出（不計入詞數）。

　　Dear Mr. Wang,

　　_______________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Yue

　　【考點】考察應用文寫作

　　【寫作指導】

　　本文屬于應用文中的書信，所以需要注意書信的特殊格式以及特殊用語。要求以李越的口吻向圖書館王老師推薦科普類圖書（popular science books）和文學類圖書（literary books）。要點：1.你向王老師推薦這兩類書。2.理由：科普類圖書幫助我們理解科技的基本原則，引起我們的好奇心和發展意識。文學類的書可以提高我們的文學素養。鼓勵我們批判類的思維。

　　本文對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

　　【一句多譯】

　　那就是我我推薦另外一種書：文學作品。如古典文學，大師作品。通過精彩的故事和語言呈現偉大的思想。

　　（1）That is why I recommend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language.

　　（2）That is the reason

　　why I recommend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language.

　　【參考范文】

　　Dear Mr. Wang,

　　Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.

　　What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.

　　In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.

　　I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Yue

　　書面表達（滿分2分）’m Li Hua from Fujian.

　　I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【參考范文】

　　Dear Sir,

　　I’m Li Hua from Fujian, When I was reading the advertisement, the aim of this activity impressed me greatly. I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. It is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation.

　　As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, good at English and have experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12. I think it is a kind of win-win activity. For one thing, I can help take care of the children. For another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.

　　I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Sincerely yours,