2024高考英語：短文改錯練習（5）及答案解析

　　【英語卷（解析）·2024屆廣西桂林十八中高三上學期第一次月考（202409）】

　　第一節

　　短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　?。ㄗⅲ罕绢}為新課改內容）

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有 10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線（___），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　In the first day when I went to work in a very famous restaurant, my boss complained that there were very a few people coming for dinner. So I am “invited” to have a meal in the restaurant. After ordered two French dishes and some food, I began to look frequently at their watch timing the serving of the meal. Meanwhile, I looked around to see that there was anything else wrong there. I wrote something improper down secret. My meal was not serving yet. I looked at my watch 32 minutes passed! I realized that wait too long for service was the main reason why the business was poor. Then I wrote a report about my findings and presented it the boss.

　　【答案】【知識點】E1 短文改錯記敘文

　　【答案解析】

　　71. 第一句 第一個in改為on。

　　72. a few 改為few。

　　73. 第二句 am改為was。

　　74. 第三句 ordered改為 ordering。Order

　　75. their改為my。 I ,它的形容詞性物主代詞是my。

　　76. 第四句that改為whether。

　　77. 第五句 secret改為secretly

　　78. 第六句 serving改為served。Meal

　　79. 第八句 wait改為waiting。

　　80. 第九句 the boss前加to。present sth to sb 將某物呈獻給某人

　　第一節 短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：把缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：1.在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen pal, hopefully a girl in the early twenties, and with interests similarly to mine. In my mind, he is someone interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Beside, it will be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping one at home for some time. With such pen pal, I hope I can share with her my experiences in traveling, taking care of pets, or whichever we have in common. I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learning more about her country. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

　　【答案】

　　1.把for去掉

　　ask for意為

　　2.the改為her

　　in one's twenties在某人

　　3.similarly改為similar

　　similar to是后置定語修飾interests

　　4.he改為she

　　這里指代的是a girl所以要用she

　　5.interesting改為interested

　　be interested in對感興趣這里同第

　　6.Beside改為Besides

　　beside adv.旁邊地 adv.除此之外

　　7.such后加a

　　such a pen pal這樣一個筆友such a如此一個

　　8.whichever改為whatever

　　whatever 無論什么，強調不明什么對象。whichever 無論哪個，強調在明確的對象中不知要選哪個。

　　9.d改為believe

　　根據后面的從句的時態可知這里是一般現在時

　　10.learning改為learn

　　learn是will的賓語所以用原形

　　(2024·寶雞市三模)

　　Jack has regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day,

　　Jack was going home by bike as usual while he heard a woman screaming

　　for help.Then he was riding quickly towards the direction of the voice.At the corner, he saw a woman stopping by a man with a knife in her hand.Without hesitation, Jack made a immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by held him down against the ground.A few minutes later, three policeman came and took the robber away.Slight wounded as he was in the left hand, but since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.

　　答案：

　　Jack has

　　regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day,

　　Jack was going home by bike as usual

　　he heard a woman screaming

　　for help.Then he was riding quickly

　　the direction of the voice.At the corner, he saw a woman

　　by a man with a knife in

　　hand.Without hesitation, Jack made

　　immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by

　　him down against the ground.A few minutes later, three

　　came and took the robber away. wounded as he was in the left hand,

　　since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.

　　(2024·長春市第四次調測)

　　I still remember my middle school life in Changchun. I was then in school for student from Wenchuan. As we were all left home of an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we will play basketball on the playground, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. It has been five years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.

　　答案：

　　I still remember my middle school life in

　　Changchun. I was then in

　　school for

　　from Wenchuan. As we

　　all left home

　　an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by . However, we seldom felt lonely or . We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we

　　play basketball on the playground,

　　in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We

　　each other as brothers and sisters. It has been five years

　　we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.

　　(2024·甘肅省二診)

　　Many teachers worried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise.Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grownups to make children to want things that they don't real need.

　　答案：

　　Many teachers

　　worried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies,

　　children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because

　　so much viewing, children may not

　　develop the habit of

　　and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio

　　young people listen to, although radios can be very .Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials.

　　one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grownups to make children

　　want things that they don't

　　need.

　　(2024·烏魯木齊三診)

　　Rock climbing is increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind，it is real positive in our life. On one hand，it is great exercise. It not only build up our strength and endurance and it also helps increase our balance and determination. On the other hands, it allows us to get outside enjoy

　　nature. For those of them who spend our days outside working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite refreshed. For conclusion, it is a good to go climbing at least once a month. Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.

　　答案：

　　Rock climbing is increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind，it is

　　positive in our life. On one hand，it is great exercise. It not only

　　up our strength and endurance

　　it also helps increase our balance and determination. On the other ， it allows us to get outside

　　enjoy

　　nature. For those of

　　who spend our days

　　working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite .

　　conclusion, it is

　　good to go climbing at least once a month. Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.

　　2024高考英語：短文改錯練習（5）及答案解析

　　【英語卷（解析）·2024屆廣西桂林十八中高三上學期第一次月考（202409）】

　　第一節

　　短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　?。ㄗⅲ罕绢}為新課改內容）

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有 10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線（___），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　In the first day when I went to work in a very famous restaurant, my boss complained that there were very a few people coming for dinner. So I am “invited” to have a meal in the restaurant. After ordered two French dishes and some food, I began to look frequently at their watch timing the serving of the meal. Meanwhile, I looked around to see that there was anything else wrong there. I wrote something improper down secret. My meal was not serving yet. I looked at my watch 32 minutes passed! I realized that wait too long for service was the main reason why the business was poor. Then I wrote a report about my findings and presented it the boss.

　　【答案】【知識點】E1 短文改錯記敘文

　　【答案解析】

　　71. 第一句 第一個in改為on。

　　72. a few 改為few。

　　73. 第二句 am改為was。

　　74. 第三句 ordered改為 ordering。Order

　　75. their改為my。 I ,它的形容詞性物主代詞是my。

　　76. 第四句that改為whether。

　　77. 第五句 secret改為secretly

　　78. 第六句 serving改為served。Meal

　　79. 第八句 wait改為waiting。

　　80. 第九句 the boss前加to。present sth to sb 將某物呈獻給某人

　　第一節 短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：把缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：1.在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　I am writing to ask for whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen pal, hopefully a girl in the early twenties, and with interests similarly to mine. In my mind, he is someone interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Beside, it will be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been keeping one at home for some time. With such pen pal, I hope I can share with her my experiences in traveling, taking care of pets, or whichever we have in common. I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learning more about her country. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

　　【答案】

　　1.把for去掉

　　ask for意為

　　2.the改為her

　　in one's twenties在某人

　　3.similarly改為similar

　　similar to是后置定語修飾interests

　　4.he改為she

　　這里指代的是a girl所以要用she

　　5.interesting改為interested

　　be interested in對感興趣這里同第

　　6.Beside改為Besides

　　beside adv.旁邊地 adv.除此之外

　　7.such后加a

　　such a pen pal這樣一個筆友such a如此一個

　　8.whichever改為whatever

　　whatever 無論什么，強調不明什么對象。whichever 無論哪個，強調在明確的對象中不知要選哪個。

　　9.d改為believe

　　根據后面的從句的時態可知這里是一般現在時

　　10.learning改為learn

　　learn是will的賓語所以用原形

　　(2024·寶雞市三模)

　　Jack has regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day,

　　Jack was going home by bike as usual while he heard a woman screaming

　　for help.Then he was riding quickly towards the direction of the voice.At the corner, he saw a woman stopping by a man with a knife in her hand.Without hesitation, Jack made a immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by held him down against the ground.A few minutes later, three policeman came and took the robber away.Slight wounded as he was in the left hand, but since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.

　　答案：

　　Jack has

　　regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day,

　　Jack was going home by bike as usual

　　he heard a woman screaming

　　for help.Then he was riding quickly

　　the direction of the voice.At the corner, he saw a woman

　　by a man with a knife in

　　hand.Without hesitation, Jack made

　　immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by

　　him down against the ground.A few minutes later, three

　　came and took the robber away. wounded as he was in the left hand,

　　since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.

　　(2024·長春市第四次調測)

　　I still remember my middle school life in Changchun. I was then in school for student from Wenchuan. As we were all left home of an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we will play basketball on the playground, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. It has been five years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.

　　答案：

　　I still remember my middle school life in

　　Changchun. I was then in

　　school for

　　from Wenchuan. As we

　　all left home

　　an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by . However, we seldom felt lonely or . We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we

　　play basketball on the playground,

　　in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We

　　each other as brothers and sisters. It has been five years

　　we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.

　　(2024·甘肅省二診)

　　Many teachers worried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise.Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grownups to make children to want things that they don't real need.

　　答案：

　　Many teachers

　　worried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies,

　　children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because

　　so much viewing, children may not

　　develop the habit of

　　and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio

　　young people listen to, although radios can be very .Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials.

　　one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grownups to make children

　　want things that they don't

　　need.

　　(2024·烏魯木齊三診)

　　Rock climbing is increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind，it is real positive in our life. On one hand，it is great exercise. It not only build up our strength and endurance and it also helps increase our balance and determination. On the other hands, it allows us to get outside enjoy

　　nature. For those of them who spend our days outside working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite refreshed. For conclusion, it is a good to go climbing at least once a month. Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.

　　答案：

　　Rock climbing is increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind，it is

　　positive in our life. On one hand，it is great exercise. It not only

　　up our strength and endurance

　　it also helps increase our balance and determination. On the other ， it allows us to get outside

　　enjoy

　　nature. For those of

　　who spend our days

　　working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite .

　　conclusion, it is

　　good to go climbing at least once a month. Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.