鎖定高考

　　【2024新課標全國II】書面表達（滿分25分）

　　86. 假如你是李華，計劃和同學去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人們國重陽節（the Double Ninth Festival）。請給外教Lucy寫封郵件，邀她一同前往內容包括：1. 出發及返回時間；2. 活動：包餃子、表演節目等。

　　注意：1. 詞數100左右；2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；3. 結語已為你寫好。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【參考答案】

　　Dear Lucy,

　　I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.

　　Looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】本篇書面表達屬于英文書信，根據提示信息說明邀請Lucy去參加的活動和時間等。寫作時注意以下幾點：1. 仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確三個要點：邀請、時間、具體活動。2. 提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象。要一句提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫。3. 根據要表達的內容確定句子的時態、語態；就本文而言應該用一般將來時態。4. 注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

　　【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明。We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了which引導的定語從句和句式spend time doing。此外，還有if從句以及一些短語如invite you to join us，for a visit to，make dumplings等。

　　【考點定位】考查提綱作文。

　　【名師點睛】本作文從實際生活出發，以英語的交際性和實用性為目標，兼顧尊老敬老和做志愿者的教育意義。體現了課程標準要求的以知識運用為教學目標的要求。在高三備考時，應該多從把語言作為交流的工具的角度去準備書面表達。

　　【2024新課標全國I】

　　書面表達（滿分25分）

　　假定你是李華，你校英文報“外國文化”欄目擬刊登介紹美國節日風俗和中學生生活的短文。請給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿，要點如下：欄目介紹；稿件內容；稿件長度：約400詞；交稿日期：6月28日前。

　　注意：詞數100左右；可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫的；開頭語已為你寫好。

　　Dear Peter,

　　I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　【答案】

　　Dear Peter,

　　I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.

　　The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?

　　I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結構。比如It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.運用了過去分詞作后置定語， And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.運用了賓語從句。此外，文章還使用了大量習語和短語，如be popular among, so long as, look forward to, hear from等。

　　【考點定位】考查提綱作文。

　　【名師點睛】書面表達考查大家所熟悉的提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。文中巧妙地使用了一些固定句式和過渡詞語，不僅增強了表達效果，而且實現了形式與內容的統一。

　　【2024北京】

　　假如你是紅星中學高三李華，請給你的美國朋友Jim寫一封信，告訴他你打算參加龍舟訓練營，希望他一起參加郵件的內容包括：1. 介紹訓練營的相關內容（例如；時間，地點，參加者等）；2. 說明你打算參加的原因；3. 詢問對方的意向。

　　注意：1. 詞數不少于50；2. 開頭和結尾已給出， 不計入總詞數。

　　提示詞：龍舟訓練營Dragon Boat Training Camp

　　Dear Jim,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　Dear Jim,

　　I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if you’d like to go with me.

　　This camp will open on July 20th, It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and I’ll send you more information.

　　Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，運用了一些邀請信里常用的句型。如：I’m writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday；I wonder if you’d like to go with me.文中注意使用了一般將來時、一般現在時等不同的時態來敘述不同的事情，對時態有較好的把握。

　　【考點定位】應用文類書面表達

　　【名師點睛】本題是一篇考的是邀請信，龍舟的一個藝術節，仍然是傳統文化的主題。采分點主要是三個板塊，一是相關細節的處理。因為在第一個要點當中寫到，學生要自己設計時間、地點以及參賽人員，這使學生需要自行發揮得，編纂的時候要合理一些。二提到你的參加原因，原因必然是考官會關注的，為什么要參加龍州藝術界的活動。三提到兩個字，就是詢問，希望學生在寫作的時候盡量避開一些非常生硬的詞匯。注意寫邀請信常用句型：On behalf of…, I am writing to invite you to take part in the…；I’d like to be involved in…due to the fact that…I am looking forward to your reply/arrival/coming/attendance等考生在應用文寫作中一定要體現出交際功能，重視該文體的寫作結構，除稱呼與落款必須寫齊全外，正文部分一般開頭應道明寫作目的，中間呈現具體細節，結尾處補充禮貌性話語。另外，應用文的語言結構忌過于復雜，用詞忌過難過偏，少用倒裝從句嵌套等長難句。語言與用詞做到適用應用場合，準確到位即可。只要做到以上幾點，應用文部分即可拿到一個不錯的分數。

　　【2024上海】

　　Guided Writing

　　Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

　　學校即將舉辦“讀書節”，目前正廣泛征集“讀書節”宣傳冊圖片。假設你是該校學生潘陽，你已找到以下三幅圖片，決定給讀書節組委會寫一封信，推薦其中一幅，你的信須包括以下內容：1. 簡單描述你想推薦的那幅圖片；2. 闡述你用這幅圖片宣傳“讀書節”的理由。

　　【參考答案】

　　Dear Sir/Madam,

　　Since the Reading Festival is around the corner, I’m writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading.

　　In the picture, three students are sitting at the table, discussing heatedly what they have just read. It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion. Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration, as far as I’m concerned, it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated. Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots. You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can’t help sharing it with your classmates or best friends, who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well. The moment you mention the book, the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own. My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that, through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself, but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers, which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book. To sum up, the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading, instead of being dull and isolating, can be full of participation and common interest. I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I’m looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Pan Yang

　　【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式文章還使用了大量習語和短語，如not only…but also; as far as I’m concerned; To sum up ; share with等。

　　【考點定位】考查描述圖片及表達理由。

　　【名師點睛】一篇好的文章除了書寫工整，還需要條理清晰以及充分利用各種句式和語法表達。可以適當地記憶一些表達的模板比如說總結，開頭和結尾。

　　【2024福建】

　　書面表達滿分25分）

　　請閱讀下面圖畫，按要求用英語寫一篇詞數為120左右的短文。

　　內容包括：1. 描述畫面；2. 概述其含義；3. 談談個人感想。

　　鑿壁偷光

　　注意：1. 短文開頭已給出,不計入總詞數；2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫；3. 短文中不能出現與本人相關的信息；

　　參考詞匯：鑿，鉆：bore

　　In the picture,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　【答案】

　　In the picture, we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it. A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.

　　This is a well-known story from ancient Chinese idiom. The boy, being poor, couldn’t afford even a candle, so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbour’s house to read at night. The moral of the story is spare no effort to accquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.

　　Of course, things are totally different today. It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts. Hard work pays off. We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get perpared for the future.

　　【亮點分析】文章第一段描述圖片，第一句中用到了動詞ing形式的非謂語動詞做伴隨狀語和with的復合結構。第二段第一句開始說這個圖片的主題。第二句用一個分詞結構表示伴隨狀語最后一句用no matter引導的讓步狀語從句。第三段俗語：Hard work pays off.功夫不負有心人。

　　【考點定位】看圖說話寫作。

　　【名師點睛】本文考查看圖說話寫作，要求學生仔細描述圖片并且發表自己的感受。一篇好的文章除了書寫工整，還需要條理清晰以及充分利用各種句式和語法表達。可以適當地記憶一些表達的模，板比如說總結，開頭和結尾以豐富文章的內容。

　　【2024安徽】

　　某英文雜志正在舉辦以“Fancy yourself as an interviewer”為主題的征文活動，請你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview”為題，寫一篇英語短文。

　　內容包括：1. 采訪的對象；2. 采訪的原因；3. 想提的問題。

　　注意：1. 詞數120左右；2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；3. 短文中不能出現與本人相關的信息；4. 短文的標題已給出，不計人總詞數。

　　A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview

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　　【參考答案】

　　A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview

　　The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.

　　I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the world. I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it.

　　If I could interview him, I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained. I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have read. Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.

　　【亮點說明】范文使用了一些重點句型：定語從句I would like to interview is Yang Liwei；原因狀語從句because he is not only the first Chinese...；賓語從句①I could learn a great deal from him about it，②what made him an astronaut and how he was trained；條件狀語從句If I could interview him；非限制性定語從句which must be very interesting等，顯示了扎實的語法功底，也使作文的句式變得多樣；范文還使用了一些固定搭配和固定短語：one of the..., the first to..., be interested in, a great deal, such...as等，使作文的內容變得更加豐富；范文注意使用not only...but also, and, also和finally等來銜接句子，使范文顯得語意連貫、銜接緊湊。

　　【考點定位】命題類材料作文

　　【名師點睛】題目給出了一個征文的通知，要求考生根據提示以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview”為題，寫一篇英語短文。題目屬于命題作文，不過，題目給出了寫作的框架，一定程度上降低了難度。需要注意的是，所寫的作文必須涵蓋所有的要點，如果能夠使用高級詞匯和重要句型，將會給作文增色不少。

　　【2024湖南】

　　Section C (25 marks)

　　Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.

　　請以老師當眾表揚你為話題，用下面所給的句子開頭，續寫一篇英語短文。