專題技能突破(21)短文改錯(cuò)之通讀全文，糾正邏輯錯(cuò)誤【技能講解】　通讀全文，了解短文的大意， 把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱、非謂語的主被動(dòng)關(guān)系及行文邏輯。有時(shí)孤立的分析某個(gè)句子，其結(jié)構(gòu)正確、語義通順，無錯(cuò)可改，但如果聯(lián)系上下文，便會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)該句中有不合邏輯的地方，需做出改正。典例剖析1.[2024·課標(biāo)全國卷]When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there.

　　[答案]　think→thought　考查時(shí)態(tài)。由was, hoped和would be可知，此處敘述的是過去的事情，故用一般過去時(shí)。

　　2．[2024·課標(biāo)全國卷]We must find ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, we'll live to regret it.

　　[答案]　your→our或the　考查代詞。根據(jù)上下句語境，我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境，故改為our, 也可用定冠詞the來限定。

　　3．[2024·浙江高考]In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around it.

　　[答案]　is→was　考查時(shí)態(tài)。全文用的都是過去時(shí)，所以把is改為was。

　　4．In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. What do you think I should do? Ifyou were me, would you talk to him?

　　[答案]　him→them　考查代詞。根據(jù)上下文及their一詞可知，此處代詞指代錯(cuò)誤，故將him改為them。

　　5．On average, there are 800 tornadoes in the US each year, cause about 80 deaths and 1,500 injuries.

　　[答案]　cause→causing　考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。causing作結(jié)果狀語，表“自然而然的結(jié)果”用現(xiàn)在分詞。

　　技能演練

　　短文改錯(cuò)

　　(一)

　　A man has been waiting at the bus stop. After a few minutes later, the bus arrived and did not stop. The man thought it would stop a little far, so he started running after the bus. Fortunately, the bus never stopped. The man kept follow the bus until he arrived home. The man was very glad that he could save bit of money. He happily told his wife, “Honey, today I ran after the buses until getting home. I didn't have to pay the fee.” Surprisingly, the wife blamed her, “You fool! Do you know how many you could save if you ran after a taxi？”

　　答案：

　　A man

　　been waiting at the bus stop. After a few minutes , the bus arrived

　　did not stop. The man thought it would stop a little ， so he started running after the bus. ， the bus never stopped. The man kept

　　the bus until he arrived home. The man was very glad that he could save

　　bit of money. He happily told his wife, “Honey, today I ran after the

　　until getting home. I didn't have to pay the fee.” Surprisingly, the wife blamed ， “You fool! Do you know how

　　you could save if you ran after a taxi？”

　　(二)

　　Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it's famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon that we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys,

　　visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautifully. The time passes quickly. Evening came. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.

　　答案：

　　Last week my parents and I took a

　　trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it's

　　famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon

　　we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of

　　were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys,

　　temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking

　　since the scenery was so . The time

　　quickly. Evening came. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive

　　the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep

　　the moment my head touched the pillow.

　　專題技能突破(21)短文改錯(cuò)之通讀全文，糾正邏輯錯(cuò)誤【技能講解】　通讀全文，了解短文的大意， 把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱、非謂語的主被動(dòng)關(guān)系及行文邏輯。有時(shí)孤立的分析某個(gè)句子，其結(jié)構(gòu)正確、語義通順，無錯(cuò)可改，但如果聯(lián)系上下文，便會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)該句中有不合邏輯的地方，需做出改正。典例剖析1.[2024·課標(biāo)全國卷]When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there.

　　[答案]　think→thought　考查時(shí)態(tài)。由was, hoped和would be可知，此處敘述的是過去的事情，故用一般過去時(shí)。

　　2．[2024·課標(biāo)全國卷]We must find ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, we'll live to regret it.

　　[答案]　your→our或the　考查代詞。根據(jù)上下句語境，我們應(yīng)該保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境，故改為our, 也可用定冠詞the來限定。

　　3．[2024·浙江高考]In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around it.

　　[答案]　is→was　考查時(shí)態(tài)。全文用的都是過去時(shí)，所以把is改為was。

　　4．In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. What do you think I should do? Ifyou were me, would you talk to him?

　　[答案]　him→them　考查代詞。根據(jù)上下文及their一詞可知，此處代詞指代錯(cuò)誤，故將him改為them。

　　5．On average, there are 800 tornadoes in the US each year, cause about 80 deaths and 1,500 injuries.

　　[答案]　cause→causing　考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。causing作結(jié)果狀語，表“自然而然的結(jié)果”用現(xiàn)在分詞。

　　技能演練

　　短文改錯(cuò)

　　(一)

　　A man has been waiting at the bus stop. After a few minutes later, the bus arrived and did not stop. The man thought it would stop a little far, so he started running after the bus. Fortunately, the bus never stopped. The man kept follow the bus until he arrived home. The man was very glad that he could save bit of money. He happily told his wife, “Honey, today I ran after the buses until getting home. I didn't have to pay the fee.” Surprisingly, the wife blamed her, “You fool! Do you know how many you could save if you ran after a taxi？”

　　答案：

　　A man

　　been waiting at the bus stop. After a few minutes , the bus arrived

　　did not stop. The man thought it would stop a little ， so he started running after the bus. ， the bus never stopped. The man kept

　　the bus until he arrived home. The man was very glad that he could save

　　bit of money. He happily told his wife, “Honey, today I ran after the

　　until getting home. I didn't have to pay the fee.” Surprisingly, the wife blamed ， “You fool! Do you know how

　　you could save if you ran after a taxi？”

　　(二)

　　Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it's famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon that we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys,

　　visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautifully. The time passes quickly. Evening came. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.

　　答案：

　　Last week my parents and I took a

　　trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it's

　　famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon

　　we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of

　　were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys,

　　temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking

　　since the scenery was so . The time

　　quickly. Evening came. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive

　　the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep

　　the moment my head touched the pillow.