2024年高考英語(yǔ)高效書(shū)面表達(dá)專題卷:28(含解析)

1.
人們完成工作的方式通常有兩種:獨(dú)立完成與合作完成。兩種方式各有特點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)你以此為題,按照以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。
獨(dú)立完成:自行安排,自己解決問(wèn)題:
合作完成:一起討論,相互學(xué)習(xí):
我喜歡的方式及理由:
寫(xiě)作要求:
必須使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部所給內(nèi)容:
將5個(gè)句子組成連貫的短文:
開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù):
There are basically two ways to get work done. One is to work individually. 。。。
2.閱讀下面的短文,然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
The Nigerian postal service has witnessed a reduction in the number of letters sent, especially by individuals, due to the alternatives of email and text.
“People prefer these over letters, because of the speed, although letters serve many purposes, other than conveying of messages", said Barry Varley Tipton, principal of Cherry Field College.
But some people think that the vanishing(逐漸消失的) art of letter writing has grave (嚴(yán)重的) consequences for students, teachers, the economy, society and the beauty of reading from loved ones, because letters in those days usually had a variety of styles .
A lover of letters writing, Hajiya Aisha refers to the occasions she has seen people enraged, because their connections at a cyber cafe took 56 seconds rather than the usual 36 hours. She says, “Although letters are slow, waiting for something good is not wholly a bad thing. Nothing beats a hand written letter.”
"When I was a graduate studying overseas twenty five years ago, my mother wrote to me daily. It was wonderful to receive those letters. They often said nothing more than everyone was thinking of me. I continue this tradition with several friends who are scattered worldwide. Hand written letters show the love that we have for family and friends. Email cannot replace the smile of actually getting the letter. The warm, sincere thank- you note, or the sweetly scented love letter we usually received and sent in those days is irreplaceable" she said.
Will electronic age stamps replace letters? Hopefully not, since it takes with it a culture rich in colour, history, and communication. Letters, like bits of ourselves, deserve to be stored away for future readers, giving them insight into details as small as the price and pattern of stamps, and as great as personal insights exchanged long ago.
【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】
1. 以約30詞概括以上短文的主要內(nèi)容:
2. 然后以約120個(gè)詞以“Will written letters die out ?”為主題寫(xiě)一篇短文,并包括如下要點(diǎn):
(1)有些人認(rèn)為用手機(jī)收發(fā)短信和用因特網(wǎng)收發(fā)郵件更加方便快捷,寫(xiě)信很費(fèi)時(shí)間
(2)有些人喜歡和朋友或家人寫(xiě)信
(3)你的觀點(diǎn)
【寫(xiě)作要求】
1. 你可以使用實(shí)例或其他論述方法支持你的論點(diǎn),也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容,但不得直接引用閱讀材料中的句子
2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
概括準(zhǔn)確、語(yǔ)言規(guī)范、內(nèi)容合適,篇章連貫。
(請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}紙上作答)
3.最近,你校成立了一個(gè)心理咨詢室,取名為“心靈的港灣(Harbor For Your Soul)”。該咨詢室配有一名心理咨詢師,旨在為全校學(xué)生提供專業(yè)的心理咨詢服務(wù)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示,為校英語(yǔ)墻報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇120詞左右的報(bào)道。
名稱 心靈的港灣(Harbor For Your Soul)
成立時(shí)間 上周三
地點(diǎn) 圖書(shū)樓2樓
開(kāi)放時(shí)間 每周一、二、四下午5:00-6:00
原因 目前高中生的學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)越來(lái)越重,心理問(wèn)題日益突出
目的 提供心理指導(dǎo),緩解心理壓力,促進(jìn)身心健康發(fā)展
你的看法 ?
參考詞匯:psychological counseling room
心理咨詢室
psychologist 心理咨詢師
4.請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
Hold fast to dreams, for if dreams die, life is a broken-winged bird that can never fly.
注意:1. 無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題,不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ);
2. 除詩(shī)歌外,文體不限;
3. 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和班級(jí)名稱;
4. 詞數(shù)為120左右。
你校學(xué)生會(huì)準(zhǔn)備辦一期英語(yǔ)墻報(bào),主題為:保護(hù)環(huán)境從我做起。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下圖所示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。
disposable chopsticks
注意:1.詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右,開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好;
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
What Can I Do for Our Environment?
Everyone can do something for our environment.
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
參考答案
1.
There are basically two ways to get work done. One is to work individually. In this way, people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it. What’s more, they will be able to learn how to solve problems on their own.
People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other. Besides, they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.
Personally, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them
【解析】
2.
Thanks to email and text, people nowadays make their communication quick and convenient, and fewer and fewer letters are written. However, it is still believed that written letters are irreplaceable.
It’s true that many people find it easy to send emails and text messages and often avoid writing letters completely. However, I don’t agree that written letters will gradually disappear.
First of all, it seems to me that letters written by people include a piece of soul and letters are a reflection of human emotions. For instance, using the Internet my sister still likes to receive ordinary letters by post, because they help her to feel a close bond with people living far away.
Secondly, for many years the written word was one of the most powerful tools in the world. Moreover, for many people, to write a letter is an element of their traditions. In many cases the Internet is not considered to be substitute for letters.
In conclusion, letters will never become extinct because of their importance to many generations of people.
Possible version II
Thanks to email and text, people nowadays make their communication quick and convenient, and fewer and fewer letters are written. However, it is still believed that written letters are irreplaceable.
There is no doubt that with the help of the Internet and cell phones, people find it easy and convenient to communicate with others. Compared with them, writing letters seems to be a waste of time.
On the other hand, however, some people do enjoy receiving letters from friends and families, and meanwhile, they prefer to write letters to keep in touch with them rather than send them emails or text them messages.
As far as I am concerned, letters written by people will never disappear. Firstly, it seems to me that they include a piece of soul and letters are a reflection of human emotions. Secondly, for many years the written word was one of the most powerful tools in the world. Moreover, for many people, to write a letter is an element of their traditions. In many cases the Internet is not considered to replace letters.
In conclusion, letters will never become extinct because of their importance to many generations of people.
【解析】略
3.With more and more students feeling stressed out, a psychological counseling room, named “Harbor For Your Soul” was opened in our school last Wednesday. It is on the second floor of the Library Building, open from 5:00 pm to 6:00 pm every Monday, Tuesday and Thursday afternoon.
A psychologist is on duty at the room and he will provide psychological guidance for students and help resolve their mental health issues and concerns.
As its name suggests, “Harbor For Your Soul” will become a place of peace for our souls.
There is no doubt that it will play an important role in our students’ healthy development, both physically and psychologically.
【解析】
試題分析:考查表格類作文的寫(xiě)作。介紹學(xué)校心理咨詢室根據(jù)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一份報(bào)告There is no doubt that it will play an important role in our students’ healthy development, both physically and psychologically.用的就是同位語(yǔ)從句和固定句式,還要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把句與句連起來(lái),如:for one thing,for another thing;what’s more等
4.
The meaning of life lies in holding fast to dreams. But the changing world seems telling me that people gradually get their dreams lost somehow in the process of growing up, and sometimes I personally find myself saying goodbye unconsciously to those distant childhood dreams.
However, we need dreams. They keep us going; they represent possibility even when we are dragged down by reality. Most successful people are dreams as well as ordinary people who are not afraid to think big and dare to be great. When we were little kids, we all dreamed of doing something big, something significant. Now what we need to do is to keep to them. However, the toughest part is that we often have no idea how to act out all your fantasies. Well, just start with concrete goals and stick to it. Don’t let the nameless fear confuse the eye and defeat our strong belief of future. Through our talents, through our intelligence, through our efforts and through our creativity, we will make it.
Hold fast to dreams, for when dreams go, life is a barren field frozen with snow. So my dear friends, think of your old and maybe dead dreams. Whatever it is, pick it up and make it alive from today.
【解析】
試題分析:考查開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作,開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題,并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高,要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí),首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型,在你的能力范圍之內(nèi),選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化,因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體,如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候,可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章使用了很好的短語(yǔ)和句子:lie in 在于, in the process of 在…過(guò)程中,dreamed of夢(mèng)想,stick to堅(jiān)持,make it成功, Most successful people are dreams as well as ordinary people who are not afraid to think big and dare to be great. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句, Now what we need to do is to keep to them. 這句話用了主語(yǔ)從句,However, the toughest part is that we often have no idea how to act out all your fantasies. 這句話用了表語(yǔ)從句, Whatever it is, pick it up and make it alive from today.這句話用了讓步狀語(yǔ)從句??傊?,范文使用大量高中教材中出現(xiàn)的高級(jí)短語(yǔ)和句型,考生應(yīng)該能做到學(xué)以致用。
考點(diǎn):考查開(kāi)放式作文
5.What Can I Do for Our Environment?
Everyone can do something for our environment.
For me, I should try to save electricity in my daily life. For example,if I am the last person to leave the classroom in the evening,I will always remember to turn off the lights. In order to protect our forests,I will use paper wisely. I should try to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. I will not use things like paper cups and disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood.
I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in.
【解析】
試題分析:這是一篇看圖寫(xiě)作,做題時(shí):1. 認(rèn)真讀圖,2. 初步構(gòu)思,考慮用詞、短語(yǔ)、句型和時(shí)態(tài)。3. 連詞成句,然后再連句成文。盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語(yǔ)或句型來(lái)表述具體的內(nèi)容。4. 反復(fù)審核,修改錯(cuò)誤。5. 宜詳則詳,該略則略。對(duì)于一些細(xì)節(jié)方面的內(nèi)容,如果是文章必不可少的,在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中是不可將其忽略的。6. 注意所給的漢語(yǔ)提示。一般說(shuō)來(lái),看圖寫(xiě)話中的漢語(yǔ)提示往往給定了有關(guān)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物等相關(guān)的信息,
1.
人們完成工作的方式通常有兩種:獨(dú)立完成與合作完成。兩種方式各有特點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)你以此為題,按照以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。
獨(dú)立完成:自行安排,自己解決問(wèn)題:
合作完成:一起討論,相互學(xué)習(xí):
我喜歡的方式及理由:
寫(xiě)作要求:
必須使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部所給內(nèi)容:
將5個(gè)句子組成連貫的短文:
開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù):
There are basically two ways to get work done. One is to work individually. 。。。
2.閱讀下面的短文,然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
The Nigerian postal service has witnessed a reduction in the number of letters sent, especially by individuals, due to the alternatives of email and text.
“People prefer these over letters, because of the speed, although letters serve many purposes, other than conveying of messages", said Barry Varley Tipton, principal of Cherry Field College.
But some people think that the vanishing(逐漸消失的) art of letter writing has grave (嚴(yán)重的) consequences for students, teachers, the economy, society and the beauty of reading from loved ones, because letters in those days usually had a variety of styles .
A lover of letters writing, Hajiya Aisha refers to the occasions she has seen people enraged, because their connections at a cyber cafe took 56 seconds rather than the usual 36 hours. She says, “Although letters are slow, waiting for something good is not wholly a bad thing. Nothing beats a hand written letter.”
"When I was a graduate studying overseas twenty five years ago, my mother wrote to me daily. It was wonderful to receive those letters. They often said nothing more than everyone was thinking of me. I continue this tradition with several friends who are scattered worldwide. Hand written letters show the love that we have for family and friends. Email cannot replace the smile of actually getting the letter. The warm, sincere thank- you note, or the sweetly scented love letter we usually received and sent in those days is irreplaceable" she said.
Will electronic age stamps replace letters? Hopefully not, since it takes with it a culture rich in colour, history, and communication. Letters, like bits of ourselves, deserve to be stored away for future readers, giving them insight into details as small as the price and pattern of stamps, and as great as personal insights exchanged long ago.
【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】
1. 以約30詞概括以上短文的主要內(nèi)容:
2. 然后以約120個(gè)詞以“Will written letters die out ?”為主題寫(xiě)一篇短文,并包括如下要點(diǎn):
(1)有些人認(rèn)為用手機(jī)收發(fā)短信和用因特網(wǎng)收發(fā)郵件更加方便快捷,寫(xiě)信很費(fèi)時(shí)間
(2)有些人喜歡和朋友或家人寫(xiě)信
(3)你的觀點(diǎn)
【寫(xiě)作要求】
1. 你可以使用實(shí)例或其他論述方法支持你的論點(diǎn),也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容,但不得直接引用閱讀材料中的句子
2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
概括準(zhǔn)確、語(yǔ)言規(guī)范、內(nèi)容合適,篇章連貫。
(請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}紙上作答)
3.最近,你校成立了一個(gè)心理咨詢室,取名為“心靈的港灣(Harbor For Your Soul)”。該咨詢室配有一名心理咨詢師,旨在為全校學(xué)生提供專業(yè)的心理咨詢服務(wù)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示,為校英語(yǔ)墻報(bào)寫(xiě)一篇120詞左右的報(bào)道。
名稱 心靈的港灣(Harbor For Your Soul)
成立時(shí)間 上周三
地點(diǎn) 圖書(shū)樓2樓
開(kāi)放時(shí)間 每周一、二、四下午5:00-6:00
原因 目前高中生的學(xué)習(xí)負(fù)擔(dān)越來(lái)越重,心理問(wèn)題日益突出
目的 提供心理指導(dǎo),緩解心理壓力,促進(jìn)身心健康發(fā)展
你的看法 ?
參考詞匯:psychological counseling room
心理咨詢室
psychologist 心理咨詢師
4.請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
Hold fast to dreams, for if dreams die, life is a broken-winged bird that can never fly.
注意:1. 無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題,不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ);
2. 除詩(shī)歌外,文體不限;
3. 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和班級(jí)名稱;
4. 詞數(shù)為120左右。
你校學(xué)生會(huì)準(zhǔn)備辦一期英語(yǔ)墻報(bào),主題為:保護(hù)環(huán)境從我做起。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下圖所示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。
disposable chopsticks
注意:1.詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右,開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好;
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
What Can I Do for Our Environment?
Everyone can do something for our environment.
_____________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
參考答案
1.
There are basically two ways to get work done. One is to work individually. In this way, people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it. What’s more, they will be able to learn how to solve problems on their own.
People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other. Besides, they may work out better ways to get work done by discussion.
Personally, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them
【解析】
2.
Thanks to email and text, people nowadays make their communication quick and convenient, and fewer and fewer letters are written. However, it is still believed that written letters are irreplaceable.
It’s true that many people find it easy to send emails and text messages and often avoid writing letters completely. However, I don’t agree that written letters will gradually disappear.
First of all, it seems to me that letters written by people include a piece of soul and letters are a reflection of human emotions. For instance, using the Internet my sister still likes to receive ordinary letters by post, because they help her to feel a close bond with people living far away.
Secondly, for many years the written word was one of the most powerful tools in the world. Moreover, for many people, to write a letter is an element of their traditions. In many cases the Internet is not considered to be substitute for letters.
In conclusion, letters will never become extinct because of their importance to many generations of people.
Possible version II
Thanks to email and text, people nowadays make their communication quick and convenient, and fewer and fewer letters are written. However, it is still believed that written letters are irreplaceable.
There is no doubt that with the help of the Internet and cell phones, people find it easy and convenient to communicate with others. Compared with them, writing letters seems to be a waste of time.
On the other hand, however, some people do enjoy receiving letters from friends and families, and meanwhile, they prefer to write letters to keep in touch with them rather than send them emails or text them messages.
As far as I am concerned, letters written by people will never disappear. Firstly, it seems to me that they include a piece of soul and letters are a reflection of human emotions. Secondly, for many years the written word was one of the most powerful tools in the world. Moreover, for many people, to write a letter is an element of their traditions. In many cases the Internet is not considered to replace letters.
In conclusion, letters will never become extinct because of their importance to many generations of people.
【解析】略
3.With more and more students feeling stressed out, a psychological counseling room, named “Harbor For Your Soul” was opened in our school last Wednesday. It is on the second floor of the Library Building, open from 5:00 pm to 6:00 pm every Monday, Tuesday and Thursday afternoon.
A psychologist is on duty at the room and he will provide psychological guidance for students and help resolve their mental health issues and concerns.
As its name suggests, “Harbor For Your Soul” will become a place of peace for our souls.
There is no doubt that it will play an important role in our students’ healthy development, both physically and psychologically.
【解析】
試題分析:考查表格類作文的寫(xiě)作。介紹學(xué)校心理咨詢室根據(jù)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一份報(bào)告There is no doubt that it will play an important role in our students’ healthy development, both physically and psychologically.用的就是同位語(yǔ)從句和固定句式,還要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把句與句連起來(lái),如:for one thing,for another thing;what’s more等
4.
The meaning of life lies in holding fast to dreams. But the changing world seems telling me that people gradually get their dreams lost somehow in the process of growing up, and sometimes I personally find myself saying goodbye unconsciously to those distant childhood dreams.
However, we need dreams. They keep us going; they represent possibility even when we are dragged down by reality. Most successful people are dreams as well as ordinary people who are not afraid to think big and dare to be great. When we were little kids, we all dreamed of doing something big, something significant. Now what we need to do is to keep to them. However, the toughest part is that we often have no idea how to act out all your fantasies. Well, just start with concrete goals and stick to it. Don’t let the nameless fear confuse the eye and defeat our strong belief of future. Through our talents, through our intelligence, through our efforts and through our creativity, we will make it.
Hold fast to dreams, for when dreams go, life is a barren field frozen with snow. So my dear friends, think of your old and maybe dead dreams. Whatever it is, pick it up and make it alive from today.
【解析】
試題分析:考查開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作,開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題,并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高,要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí),首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型,在你的能力范圍之內(nèi),選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化,因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體,如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候,可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章使用了很好的短語(yǔ)和句子:lie in 在于, in the process of 在…過(guò)程中,dreamed of夢(mèng)想,stick to堅(jiān)持,make it成功, Most successful people are dreams as well as ordinary people who are not afraid to think big and dare to be great. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句, Now what we need to do is to keep to them. 這句話用了主語(yǔ)從句,However, the toughest part is that we often have no idea how to act out all your fantasies. 這句話用了表語(yǔ)從句, Whatever it is, pick it up and make it alive from today.這句話用了讓步狀語(yǔ)從句??傊段氖褂么罅扛咧薪滩闹谐霈F(xiàn)的高級(jí)短語(yǔ)和句型,考生應(yīng)該能做到學(xué)以致用。
考點(diǎn):考查開(kāi)放式作文
5.What Can I Do for Our Environment?
Everyone can do something for our environment.
For me, I should try to save electricity in my daily life. For example,if I am the last person to leave the classroom in the evening,I will always remember to turn off the lights. In order to protect our forests,I will use paper wisely. I should try to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. I will not use things like paper cups and disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood.
I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in.
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試題分析:這是一篇看圖寫(xiě)作,做題時(shí):1. 認(rèn)真讀圖,2. 初步構(gòu)思,考慮用詞、短語(yǔ)、句型和時(shí)態(tài)。3. 連詞成句,然后再連句成文。盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語(yǔ)或句型來(lái)表述具體的內(nèi)容。4. 反復(fù)審核,修改錯(cuò)誤。5. 宜詳則詳,該略則略。對(duì)于一些細(xì)節(jié)方面的內(nèi)容,如果是文章必不可少的,在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中是不可將其忽略的。6. 注意所給的漢語(yǔ)提示。一般說(shuō)來(lái),看圖寫(xiě)話中的漢語(yǔ)提示往往給定了有關(guān)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物等相關(guān)的信息,