絕對精華！10年高考英語全國卷作文題+優秀范文匯總

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2023年的新高考試卷中，英語學科在試卷結構、命題趨向、題型設置、分值分布、考查側重點等方面均呈現出了較大的變化。

英語試卷相關部分的題量和分值出現“兩增一減”的變化。英語寫作部分取消了短文改錯題，保留了書面表達題，增加了讀后續寫題，提升了閱讀理解和書面表達試題的分值與比重，更加注重了對閱讀和寫作的考查。

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1.2010年全國卷 I

【作文題目】

假設你是育才中學學生會主席李華。你校將舉辦一次英語演講比賽(speech contest)，希望附近某大學的外籍教師Smith女士來做評委。請參照以下比賽通知給她寫一封信。

英語演講比賽

主題：人與自然

時間：6月15日下午2:00--5:00

地點：501教室

參賽選手：10名學生

聯系人：李華（電話44876655）

歡迎大家光臨

注意：詞數100左右。

優秀范文

Dear Ms. Smith,

Im Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university. Im writing to invite you to be a judge at our English speech contest to be held in our school on June 15. It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. Ten students will deliver their speeches on the given topic "Man and Nature". We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. Please call me at 44876655 if you have any questions.

I am looking forward to your reply.

With best wishes,

Li Hua

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2.2010年全國卷 II

【作文題目】

假設你是李華，你的美國筆友Peter曾表示希望來中國教書。你校現需招聘外教，請給他寫封信，告知招聘信息。內容主要包括：

1. 教授課程：英語口語、英語寫作、今日美國、今日英國等

2. 授課對象：高中生（至少三年英語基礎）

3. 工作量：每周12學時，任選三門課；擔任學生英語俱樂部或英語校報顧問（advisor）

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭語已為你寫好，請將完整的回信書寫在答題卡上。

優秀范文

Dear Peter,

I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students. If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing,BritainToday and America Today, and teach 12 hours a week. The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper.

Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I’d be more than happy to help.

Best,

Li Hua

3.2011年新課標 I

【作文題目】

假設你是李華，正在一所英國學校學習暑期課程，遇到一些困難，希望得到學校輔導中心（Learning Center）的幫助。根據學校規定，你需書面預約，請按下列要點寫一封信：

1．本人簡介；

2．求助內容；

3．約定時間；

4．你的聯系方式（Email：lihua@1236.com；phone：12345678）。

注意：

1．詞數100左右；

2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3．結束語已為你寫好。

優秀范文

Dear Sir / Madam,

Im Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. Im writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and Im anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number: lihua@1236.com; 12345678.

Look forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

4.2011年新課標 II

【作文題目】假定你是李華，你所喜愛的Global Mirror周報創刊五周年之際征集讀者意見。請你依據以下內容給主編寫封信，內容主要包括：

1．說明你是該報的忠實讀者

2．贊賞該報優點：

1)兼顧國內外新聞

2)介紹名人成功故事

3．提出建議：刊登指導英語學習的文章

注意：

1. 詞數100左右，開頭語已為你寫好；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

優秀范文

Dear Editor-in-Chief,

Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!

I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.

As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

5.2023年新課標 I

【作文題目】

假定你是李華，從互聯網上得知一個國際中學生組織將在新加坡(Singapore)舉辦夏令營，歡迎各國學生參加。請寫一封電子郵件申請參加。

內容主要包括：

1. 自我介紹(包括英語能力)

2. 參加意圖(介紹中國、了解其他國家)

3. 希望獲準。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3. 郵件開頭和結尾已為你寫好。

優秀范文

Dear Sir or Madam,

Im Li Hua, a middle school student fromChina. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, IlI be able to tell students from other countries aboutChinaand learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.

Looking forward to your reply!

Regards,

Li Hua

6.2023年新課標 II

【作文題目】假定你是李華。你班同學決定為小明舉辦生日聚會。請你寫信邀請外教Susan參加，要點包括：

1. 時間：周五晚8點至9點

2. 地點：學生俱樂部

3. 內容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戲等

4. 要求：備小禮物

注意：

1. 詞數100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫;

3. 答案必須寫在答題卡相應的位置上。

優秀范文

Hi, Susan,

Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday. Wed like to invite you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. Well gather at the Students Club at 8 pm this Friday, after the evening classes. And its going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, well light the candles and sing "Happy Birthday" together for him. Then the cake will be cut and well sing songs and play games. Itll be nice to see how excited he will be. Im sure youll have a good time at the party, too.

Yours,

Li Hua

7.2023年新課標 I

【作文題目】假定你是李華。請你給筆友Peter寫封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會，帶去他想要的那幅中國畫，同時詢問他是否可以接機。信中還需說明：

李明：高個子，戴眼鏡

航班號：CA985

到達：8月6日上午11:30

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。

優秀范文

Dear Peter,

How are you doing?

I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.

Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to theU.S.? Thank you in advance!

His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

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8.2023年新課標 II

【作文題目】假定你是李華，自制了一些中國結(Chinese knot)。給開網店的美國朋友Tom寫封信，請他代賣，要點包括：

1. 外觀(尺寸、顏色、材料)

2. 象征意義

3. 價格

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭已為你寫好。

優秀范文

Dear Tom,

How are you doing? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. InChina, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck.

People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information.

Thank you!

Li Hua

9.2023年全國卷（新課標 I）

假定你是李華，計劃暑假期間去英國學習英語，為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意，請給該校寫封信，詢問有關情況（箭頭所指內容）。

注意：1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

3. 參考詞匯：住宿--accommodation

優秀范文

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.I’ve seen your ad,and I’d like to know something more about your six-week English course.First,when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?Besides,I wish there would not be too many students in a class.I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?

I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

10.2023年全國卷（新課標II/大綱）

一家英語報社向中學生征文，主題是“十年后的我”。請根據下列要點和你的暢想完成短文。

1. 家庭；

2. 工作；

3. 業余生活。

注意：1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭語已為你寫好。

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. ...

優秀范文

I often imagine what my life would be like in the future . I think my life will be very different in ten years .i will be twenty –eight years old by then . I will have my own family , probably with a lovely child . I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer . I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues . I’will do a good job in whatever I do .In my free time , I will continue to take regular exercise , such as swimming , running and various ball games . On my holidays , I will travel around the world .In a word , my life will be much richer and more colorful .

11.2023年全國卷 I

假定你是李華，你校英文報“外國文化”欄目擬刊登美國節日風俗和中學生生活的短文。請給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿，要點如下：

1. 欄目介紹；

2. 稿件內容；

3. 稿件長度：約400詞；

4. 交稿日期：6月28日前。

注意：1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭語已為你寫好。

Dear Peter,

I’d like to ask you to write anarticle for our schools English newspaper. ...

優秀范文

Dear Peter,

Id like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.

The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?

I’m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,Li Hua

12.2023年全國卷II

假定你是李華，計劃和同學去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人們過重陽節（the Double Ninth Festival）。請給外教Lucy寫封郵件，邀她一同前往，內容包括：

1. 出發及返回時間；

2. 活動：包餃子、表演節目等。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3. 結語已為你寫好。

優秀范文

Dear Lucy,

Id like toinvit you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.

Its the day for the elderly in our culture. Well go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly there. Well also spend some fun time together singing,dancing and playing games, which I hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 oclock in the afernoon.

If you are able to come with us, please let me know and well wait for you at the school gate at 9 in the morning.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

13.2023年全國卷 I

假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷（resume）。給外教Ms Jenkins 寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。

注意：1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

優秀范文

Dear Ms Jenkins,

I’m writing to ask you for help. I’m applying for a part-time job in a overseas-funded corporation. I think it’ll be a new challenge to me. Moreover, by doing the part-time job I can get some precious experience so that I can better adapt to the development and changes of society.

I’ve already written the application and resume. But I’m afraid that there are some mistakes about the words and format. So I have no choice but to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter. I’d appreciate it if you could do me a favor.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

14.2023年全國卷II

假定你是李華，你校攝影俱樂部（photography club）將舉辦國際中學生攝影展。請給你的英國朋友Peter寫封信。請他提供作品。信的內容包括：

1. 主題：環境保護；

2. 展覽時間；

3. 投稿郵箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

優秀范文

Dear Peter,

Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that theme the last time you visited our school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, you can send your photos to.

Hope to hear from you soon.

Yours

Li Hua

15.2023年全國卷III

假定你是李華，與留學生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件，內容包括：1.表示歉意；2.說明原因；3.另約時間。

注意：

1.詞數100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

優秀范文

Dear Bob,

I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.

Yours,

Li Hua

16.2023全國卷 I

假定你是李華，正在教你的英國朋友Leslie學習漢語。請你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計劃。內容包括：1、時間和地點;2、內容：學習唐詩;3、課前準備：簡要了解唐朝的歷史。

注意：1、詞數100左右；

2、可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

優秀范文

Dear Leslie,

How are you? Glad to see you have made some progress in Chinese learning and I’m writing to tell you something about our next lesson.

The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the classroom 502. In the class, you will mainly learn Tang Poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese. You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry. You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class.

If there is anything that I can help you, please don’t hesitate to tell me. Looking forward to meeting you.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

17.2023全國卷 II

假定你是李華，想邀請外教Henry一起參觀中國剪紙（paper-cutting）藝術展。請給他寫封郵件，內容包括：1、展覽時間、地點；2、展覽內容。

注意：1、詞數100左右；

2、可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

優秀范文

Dear Henry,

I’m Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now I’m glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.

The exhibition, the theme of which is “beauty of China”, will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our club’s works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of usefuland interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.

I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. I’m sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you! I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

18.2023全國卷I

假定你是李華，你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國朋友家做客，發郵件向你詢問有關習俗，請你回復郵件，內容包括：

1.到達時間；

2.合適的禮物；

3.餐桌禮儀。

注意：

1.詞數100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

優秀范文

Dear Terry,

How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend’s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.

To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you’d better bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What’s more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food.

Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.

Best wishes!

Yours,

LiHua

19.2023全國卷 II

你受學生會委托為校宣傳欄“英語天地”寫一則英文通知，請大家觀看一部英文短片Growing Together，內容包括：

1.短片內容：學校的發展；

2.放映時間、地點；

3.歡迎對短片提出意見。

注意：

1.詞數100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

優秀范文

Notice

In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union.Here are some relevant details about it.

To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school.As we all expect, it will be not only eaningful but also interesting. What’s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.

The Student Union

June 8, 2023

20.2023全國卷 III

假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter來信詢問你校學生體育運動情況，請給他回信，內容包括：

1.學校的體育場館；

2.主要的運動項目；

3.你喜歡的項目。

注意：

1.詞數100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

優秀范文

Dear Peter,

I am sodelighted tohave received your letter. You asked me in your last letter about theme physical exercise in our school and the following information may give yousomehelp.

To my great joy, a famous new stadium has been put up, which has become the landmark in our school. Besides, with the stadium built, a wide range of sports activities can be carried out, of whichtable tennis, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. I am particularly fond of basketball because it has been giving me strength to confront the challenge in my life.

Finally, I sincerely invite you to visit our school and join in the sports we both like.

Yours,

Li Hua

21.2023全國卷 I

【題目要求】

假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學習，得知當地美術館要舉辦中國畫展。請寫一封信申請做志愿者，內容包括：

1．寫信目的：2．個人優勢：3．能做的事情。

注意：

1．詞數100左右；

2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

3．結束語已為你寫好。

優秀范文

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position.

The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.

All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

22.2023全國卷 II

【題目要求】

假定你是校排球隊隊長李華。請寫封郵件告知你的隊友Chris球隊近期將參加比賽，內容包括：

1. 比賽信息；

2. 賽前準備；

3. 表達期待。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

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Dear Chris,

How is everything going? I have good news to tell you. A volleyball match is going to be held in a few weeks and our team will participate.

As for the detailed information of the match, there will be probably dozens of teams which are going to make a revolving competition. Additionally, not only can the top three teams each be awarded a medal but all the other teams taking part in it will get a reward as well. What will be the most attractive is that it will be a great honor for the top three teams to receive special volleyballs that have the name of the most popular volleyball player on them. Therefore, we must do enough preparations before the match, such as training as frequently as we can.

So excited am I that I can’t wait to join in it.How about you? Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

23.2023全國卷 III

【題目要求】

假定你是李華，你校將舉辦音樂節。請寫封郵件邀請你的英國朋友Allen參加，內容包括：

1. 時間；

2. 活動安排；

3. 歡迎他表演節目。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

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Dear Allen,

How is everything going? Our school will hold a music festival next Sunday morning in the school hall. And I’m writing to invite you to join us.

The opening ceremony will start at 9:00 am, and the schoolmaster will deliver a speech. Then there will be various fantastic performances played by talented students. You are definitely welcome to show up on stage, which will add color and fun to our festival.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

24.2023全國卷 I

第二節書面表達(滿分25分)

你校正在組織英語作文比賽。請以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題，寫一篇短文參賽，內容包括：

1. 人物簡介;

2. 尊敬和愛戴的原因。

注意：

1. 詞數100左右;

2. 短文題目和首句已為你寫好。

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Mr. Liu, aged 58, is my English teacher. He is so humorous, responsible andselfless that I respect and love him very much.

To be honest, his assistance has a great impact on me. It was Mr. Liu whomade me perceive the importance of learning English well. Had it not been forhis guidance and encouragement, I couldnt have won the first place in the cityEnglish speech contest. Without his aid, I wouldnt have boosted my integratedskills in English. Ill definitely remember his kindness and help forever.

Mr. Liu is a very respectable teacher indeed! I do thank him for what hedid for me. (111 words)

25.2023全國卷Ⅱ

上周末，你和同學參加了一次采摘活動。請你為班級英語角寫一篇短文，介紹這次活動，內容包括：

1. 農場情況；

2. 采摘過程；

3. 個人感受

注意：

1. 詞數100左右；

2. 題目已為你寫好。

題目：My Weekend

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My Weekend

Organized by the student union, a group of volunteers went to Hope Farm to help the farmers pick peaches last weekend. The farm is situated at the foot of a mountain, the sky is blue and the air is fresh. We were attracted by the beautiful scenery. There are different kinds of fruit trees as well as a variety of animals.

On arriving, we saw red ripe peaches hanging on the tree. Using baskets and ladders, We first picked the ones that were most beautiful in color, then those that were ripe and soft. I couldn’t wait to take a bite, and the sweet juice went down my throat.

I was grateful for this opportunity to get close to nature. Not only would I be able to experience fruit picking, but I could also feast on the sweetness!

26.2023全國卷Ⅲ

假定你是李華，你和同學根據英語課文改編了一個短劇。給外教MissEvans寫封郵件，請她幫忙指導。郵件內容包括:

1.劇情簡介;

2.指導內容;

3.商定時間地點。

注意:

1.詞數100左右

2.結束語已為你寫好。

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Dear Miss Evans,

How is everything going! I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.

We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short English play. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the river navigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy. However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script, we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you please spare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and make necessary changes? If it is convenient, may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?

Given your busy schedule, I’d be very appreciative if you offer to give some professional advice. Look forward to your early reply. Best regards!

Yours truly,

Li Hua

27.2023新高考全國卷Ⅰ

閱讀下面材料, 根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段, 使之構成一篇完整的短文。

The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.

Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.

One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy -his name was Bernard-had interested her very much.

“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I dont see what he can do.”

After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”

“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”

For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成).”

The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn(爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”

注意:

1. 續寫詞數應為150左右:

2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

When Mrs. Meredith heard of Johns idea, she thought it was a good one, too.

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With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.

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段落大意答案

本段大意：

Meredith一家所住社區的現狀，經濟情況不好，很多人過得很艱難，大家都相互幫助。

本段大意：

Meredith很善良。盡力幫助那些窮人。

本段大意：

一個生病窮人的家庭狀況，非常困難，急需用錢，但是沒有勞動力。尤其是名叫Bernard男孩。

“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I dont see what he can do.”

本段大意：

Meredith希望自己的孩子能去看看那家窮人，想辦法幫助他們。

After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money,” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”

本段大意：

Meredith的孩子想辦法幫助那個小男孩Bernard掙錢。

“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”

For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea! I have a solution that we can all help accomplish(完成).”

本段大意：

John想出了一個可以幫助Bernard的辦法。

本段大意：

John想出了的辦法就是制作爆米花讓Bernard 拿出去賣。

全文主題：

Meredith如何通過制作和賣爆米花幫助Bernard一家擺脫困境的。

開頭語分析

When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, shethought it was a good one, too.

當Meredith太太聽到John的主意時，她也認為這是個好主意

可以針對如何實現制作爆米花這個提議展開構思；

With everything ready, Bernard started out onhis new business.

一切準備就緒后，Bernard開始了他的新生意

可以針對Bernard如何通過賣爆米花讓家庭擺脫困境展開構思。

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When Mrs. Meredith heard of John’s idea, she thought it was a good one, too. So, they went to the local supermarket together. They bought a bag of corn and some special bags for popcorn. When they got home, they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags. With the popcorn, they went to Bernard’s home. They told Bernard how to sell the popcorn. Bernard and his parents were very grateful. And the Meredith family also felt very happy to help this family.

With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business. He took the popcorn around to the houses and sold all his popcorn. He earned a lot of money. Then, he wanted to be self-dependent. Therefore, he asked Mrs. Meredith to teach him how to make popcorn. After that, not only did he sell popcorn, but he also added cream and salt to the popcorn to make it taste better. Bernard grew up to be a remarkable man. He did not forget the help of Meredith’s family, and he also did what he could to help those in need.

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