2024屆高考英語一輪復習寫作指導課件：第1講 五大基本句型在寫作中的應用（牛津譯林版）
一、魔法導航 句子成分構成了英語中各種各樣的句子,但英語中最基本的句型只有五種,其 他各種句型都是由這五種基本句型轉換而來的。五種基本句型如下: 1.主語+系動詞+表語 本句型由“主語+系動詞+表語”構成,主要用來說明主語的特征、狀態、類 屬和身份等。系動詞可以分為以下幾類: 1.表示特征和存在狀態的:be、appear、feel、look、seem、smell、sound、 taste等; 2.表示狀態延續的:remain、stay、keep、continue、stand等; ——基本句型，舍我其誰 3.表示狀態變化的:become、get、go、turn、grow等。 ?典句引領 The peaches looked very nice and tasted very delicious.However,two days later they went bad and we were all very sad. 這些桃子看上去非常好看,嘗起來很可口。但兩天后,它們都變壞了。我們都 很傷心。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)As far as I know, his English ????(已經很好了). ?答案 has become/been very good (2)我們報紙上的“外國文化”這個欄目在我們學生中間非常受歡迎。(2024 課標全國Ⅰ) ??
?答案 The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular a- mong us students.
2.主語+不及物動詞 本句型由“主語+不及物動詞”構成,不及物動詞后不能跟賓語,用來表示主語 的動作。主語可以有定語來修飾,不及物動詞也可以有狀語來修飾。 ?典句引領 I work in a computer firm.Every day I get up early in the morning.After breakfast, I go to work by bike.我在一家電腦公司工作。每天我都早早起床。早飯后,我 騎自行車去上班。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)He ????(起床早)every morning, which is good for his health.
?答案 gets up early (2)這個訓練營將于7月20號開營。(2024北京) ?
??? ?答案 This camp will open on July 20th. 3.主語+及物動詞+賓語
本句型由“主語+及物動詞+賓語”構成,謂語動詞是主語發出的動作,但是意 思還不完整,后面需要跟賓語,即動作的承受者。可以充當賓語的有:名詞、代 詞、從句等。 ?典句引領 I took an English exam yesterday.I had prepared it for two weeks.Before I turned in the paper,I looked through it carefully.昨天我參加了一場英語考試。我為此 已經準備了兩周的時間。在上交試卷之前,我仔細地檢查了一下。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)My father ????(完成他的工作) by 9 o'clock every evening.
?答案 finishes his work (2)我們尤其歡迎關于美國人如何休假和過節的文章。(2024課標全國Ⅰ) ? ?
?答案 We would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their
holidays and festivals. 4.主語+雙賓動詞+間接賓語+直接賓語 即主語+謂語+間接賓語(人)+直接賓語(物)。如果把表示物的直接賓語放在表 示人的間接賓語前,需要借助介詞to或for。to表示:朝著,向著,對著;for表示:為 了(某人),替(某人)。 需要借助介詞to的動詞有:give、lend、hand、offer、pass、promise、return、 send、show、teach等。 需要借助介詞for的動詞有:buy、cook、find、get、make、order、save、spare 等。 ?典句引領 Mr.Smith has taught us English for 3 years.It was his 50th birthday yesterday.Ev- eryone of us bought him a present and I even told him an interesting story.史密斯 先生教我們英語已經三年了。昨天是他50歲生日。我們每個人都給他買了一 個禮物,我甚至給他講了一個有趣的故事。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)My friend ????(給我買了一個生日禮物), making me very happy.
?答案 bought me a birthday present (2)它給你和我這樣的青少年提供了一個享受運動和了解中國文化的機會。(2 015北京) ???
? ?答案 It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn
about Chinese culture. 5.主語+及物動詞+賓語+賓語補足語 本句型中賓語后面需要有成分對其進行補充說明,這就是賓語補足語。可以 充當賓補的有:形容詞、副詞、名詞、介詞短語、不定式、v.-ing形式和v.-ed 形式。 ?典句引領 The old man had a lovely daughter.He named her Lily.He made her very happy every day and wanted her to become an artist.這個老人有個可愛的女兒。他給 她起名Lily。他每天都讓她很高興并且想讓她成為一名藝術家。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)I ????(認為他的建議非常有用),although many people are against it. ??
答案 consider his advice/suggestion/tip very useful
(2)你的參與(contribution)一定會使得這次活動獲得巨大的成功。(2024遼寧) ?
?答案 Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success.
二、學以致用 1.完美文章 結合括號中的提示,用基本句型完成下面的文章。 Dear Peter, I remember you told me (1) ????(你對在中國教學感興趣).Our school now is looking for a native speaker to teach some courses to senior high students. If you come,(2) ????(你可以從下面三門課程中選擇兩門):Speaking, Writing and America Today and teach 12 hours a week.(3) ????(所有的 這些課程都將會讓學生提高他們的英語水平).Besides teaching,(4)???? ????(你也可以工作) as an advisor to our students' English club or our school's English newspaper. (5) ????(請告訴我你最終的決定) whether you like the job or not. Best, Li Hua ?答案 (1)you were interested in teaching in China (2)you can choose two of the following three courses (3)All the courses will make the students improve their English level (4)you can also work (5)Please tell me your final decision 2.話題寫作 [本期話題] 人際關系 [寫作要求] 至少運用三種基本句型。 生活中, 人人都需要朋友。但如何收獲真正的友誼呢?請根據下面的要點提 示,寫一篇70詞左右的短文。 1.誠實:謊言會使朋友遠離我們; 2.聽:理解朋友心聲的窗口; 3.無私:在朋友需要的時候伸出援手。 ? ?
???? ?答案 One possible version: Everyone needs a friend. In order to win true friendship, we should obey the fol- lowing golden rules. First of all, we should be honest with our friends. Lies will surely make them stay far away from us. In addition, we should become good listeners because listening counts a lot if we want to understand our friends clearly. Finally, we should be selfless and be ready to offer them our help whenever they are in trouble, for a friend in need is a friend indeed. 三、美文賞讀 (2024陜西) 假定你是中學生李華。美國一個中學校長代表團即將訪問你校并出席英語周 的一項活動。請根據寫作要點和寫作要求寫一篇歡迎詞。 寫作要點: 1.表示對客人的歡迎; 2.介紹此項活動(如活動目的、內容等); 3.表達對客人的祝愿。 寫作要求: 1.詞數不少于100; 2.稱呼已經給出,請寫歡迎詞正文; 3.不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱。 [我來試寫] Dear American guests, ? ?
? ?答案 One possible version: Dear American guests, On behalf of our school,I would like to express our warm welcome to you.We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities. As scheduled,①we have English Talent Show today(主謂賓).②The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abili- ties in listening and speaking(主系表).③The programme consists of the following activities(主謂賓):recitation,singing,word spelling and so on.④The show will begin(主謂)at two o'clock this afternoon at the Student Center.Dear guests,you are welcome to take part in some activities.I hope we students will benefit from your presence. ⑤I sincerely wish you a pleasant time (主謂賓+賓補)with us.Thank you. 【寫作點評】 在文中①—⑤處作者充分運用了五種基本句型中的“主謂賓”、“主系 表”、“主謂”和“主謂賓+賓補”,很好地完成了寫作任務,達到了寫作目 的。
一、魔法導航 句子成分構成了英語中各種各樣的句子,但英語中最基本的句型只有五種,其 他各種句型都是由這五種基本句型轉換而來的。五種基本句型如下: 1.主語+系動詞+表語 本句型由“主語+系動詞+表語”構成,主要用來說明主語的特征、狀態、類 屬和身份等。系動詞可以分為以下幾類: 1.表示特征和存在狀態的:be、appear、feel、look、seem、smell、sound、 taste等; 2.表示狀態延續的:remain、stay、keep、continue、stand等; ——基本句型，舍我其誰 3.表示狀態變化的:become、get、go、turn、grow等。 ?典句引領 The peaches looked very nice and tasted very delicious.However,two days later they went bad and we were all very sad. 這些桃子看上去非常好看,嘗起來很可口。但兩天后,它們都變壞了。我們都 很傷心。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)As far as I know, his English ????(已經很好了). ?答案 has become/been very good (2)我們報紙上的“外國文化”這個欄目在我們學生中間非常受歡迎。(2024 課標全國Ⅰ) ??
?答案 The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular a- mong us students.
2.主語+不及物動詞 本句型由“主語+不及物動詞”構成,不及物動詞后不能跟賓語,用來表示主語 的動作。主語可以有定語來修飾,不及物動詞也可以有狀語來修飾。 ?典句引領 I work in a computer firm.Every day I get up early in the morning.After breakfast, I go to work by bike.我在一家電腦公司工作。每天我都早早起床。早飯后,我 騎自行車去上班。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)He ????(起床早)every morning, which is good for his health.
?答案 gets up early (2)這個訓練營將于7月20號開營。(2024北京) ?
??? ?答案 This camp will open on July 20th. 3.主語+及物動詞+賓語
本句型由“主語+及物動詞+賓語”構成,謂語動詞是主語發出的動作,但是意 思還不完整,后面需要跟賓語,即動作的承受者。可以充當賓語的有:名詞、代 詞、從句等。 ?典句引領 I took an English exam yesterday.I had prepared it for two weeks.Before I turned in the paper,I looked through it carefully.昨天我參加了一場英語考試。我為此 已經準備了兩周的時間。在上交試卷之前,我仔細地檢查了一下。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)My father ????(完成他的工作) by 9 o'clock every evening.
?答案 finishes his work (2)我們尤其歡迎關于美國人如何休假和過節的文章。(2024課標全國Ⅰ) ? ?
?答案 We would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their
holidays and festivals. 4.主語+雙賓動詞+間接賓語+直接賓語 即主語+謂語+間接賓語(人)+直接賓語(物)。如果把表示物的直接賓語放在表 示人的間接賓語前,需要借助介詞to或for。to表示:朝著,向著,對著;for表示:為 了(某人),替(某人)。 需要借助介詞to的動詞有:give、lend、hand、offer、pass、promise、return、 send、show、teach等。 需要借助介詞for的動詞有:buy、cook、find、get、make、order、save、spare 等。 ?典句引領 Mr.Smith has taught us English for 3 years.It was his 50th birthday yesterday.Ev- eryone of us bought him a present and I even told him an interesting story.史密斯 先生教我們英語已經三年了。昨天是他50歲生日。我們每個人都給他買了一 個禮物,我甚至給他講了一個有趣的故事。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)My friend ????(給我買了一個生日禮物), making me very happy.
?答案 bought me a birthday present (2)它給你和我這樣的青少年提供了一個享受運動和了解中國文化的機會。(2 015北京) ???
? ?答案 It offers teenagers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn
about Chinese culture. 5.主語+及物動詞+賓語+賓語補足語 本句型中賓語后面需要有成分對其進行補充說明,這就是賓語補足語。可以 充當賓補的有:形容詞、副詞、名詞、介詞短語、不定式、v.-ing形式和v.-ed 形式。 ?典句引領 The old man had a lovely daughter.He named her Lily.He made her very happy every day and wanted her to become an artist.這個老人有個可愛的女兒。他給 她起名Lily。他每天都讓她很高興并且想讓她成為一名藝術家。 ?雕詞琢句 (1)I ????(認為他的建議非常有用),although many people are against it. ??
答案 consider his advice/suggestion/tip very useful
(2)你的參與(contribution)一定會使得這次活動獲得巨大的成功。(2024遼寧) ?
?答案 Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success.
二、學以致用 1.完美文章 結合括號中的提示,用基本句型完成下面的文章。 Dear Peter, I remember you told me (1) ????(你對在中國教學感興趣).Our school now is looking for a native speaker to teach some courses to senior high students. If you come,(2) ????(你可以從下面三門課程中選擇兩門):Speaking, Writing and America Today and teach 12 hours a week.(3) ????(所有的 這些課程都將會讓學生提高他們的英語水平).Besides teaching,(4)???? ????(你也可以工作) as an advisor to our students' English club or our school's English newspaper. (5) ????(請告訴我你最終的決定) whether you like the job or not. Best, Li Hua ?答案 (1)you were interested in teaching in China (2)you can choose two of the following three courses (3)All the courses will make the students improve their English level (4)you can also work (5)Please tell me your final decision 2.話題寫作 [本期話題] 人際關系 [寫作要求] 至少運用三種基本句型。 生活中, 人人都需要朋友。但如何收獲真正的友誼呢?請根據下面的要點提 示,寫一篇70詞左右的短文。 1.誠實:謊言會使朋友遠離我們; 2.聽:理解朋友心聲的窗口; 3.無私:在朋友需要的時候伸出援手。 ? ?
???? ?答案 One possible version: Everyone needs a friend. In order to win true friendship, we should obey the fol- lowing golden rules. First of all, we should be honest with our friends. Lies will surely make them stay far away from us. In addition, we should become good listeners because listening counts a lot if we want to understand our friends clearly. Finally, we should be selfless and be ready to offer them our help whenever they are in trouble, for a friend in need is a friend indeed. 三、美文賞讀 (2024陜西) 假定你是中學生李華。美國一個中學校長代表團即將訪問你校并出席英語周 的一項活動。請根據寫作要點和寫作要求寫一篇歡迎詞。 寫作要點: 1.表示對客人的歡迎; 2.介紹此項活動(如活動目的、內容等); 3.表達對客人的祝愿。 寫作要求: 1.詞數不少于100; 2.稱呼已經給出,請寫歡迎詞正文; 3.不能使用真實姓名和學校名稱。 [我來試寫] Dear American guests, ? ?
? ?答案 One possible version: Dear American guests, On behalf of our school,I would like to express our warm welcome to you.We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities. As scheduled,①we have English Talent Show today(主謂賓).②The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abili- ties in listening and speaking(主系表).③The programme consists of the following activities(主謂賓):recitation,singing,word spelling and so on.④The show will begin(主謂)at two o'clock this afternoon at the Student Center.Dear guests,you are welcome to take part in some activities.I hope we students will benefit from your presence. ⑤I sincerely wish you a pleasant time (主謂賓+賓補)with us.Thank you. 【寫作點評】 在文中①—⑤處作者充分運用了五種基本句型中的“主謂賓”、“主系 表”、“主謂”和“主謂賓+賓補”,很好地完成了寫作任務,達到了寫作目 的。
