徐可風12月英語四級作文及點評

　　CET4作文　　1，目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切　　2，為了讓孩子獨立，父母應該..　　How should parents help children to be independent?　　This is a thought-provoking social phenomenon that parents monopolize their childrens everything. From going to university, selecting majors to hunting for a job, parents make every crucial decision for their sons and daughters.　　No doubt, what the parents do leads to a most serious problemchildren are badly dependent on parental help. Every morning the children wake up, but they dont know what they should do and how they could do. They lose the ability to take care of themselves, and in turn, lose the opportunity to succeed.　　Stop! Please. Dont keep on spoiling the children anymore, because they need independence. These are some suggestions for parents. Firstly, parents should create an independent climate for their children. Secondly, parents should try to help children maintain their independence. Finally, parents should always believe that their children have the ability to make their own decisions in their lives.　　Helping children towards independence will always be our businesses.　　有一種愛叫做放手　　徐可風評析CET4作文　　一、命題　　從上半年的錯別字到這次的孩子獨立，充分體現了命題組的最大原則反映當前社會的具有普遍意義和教育意義的現象?！　∥覀兛梢钥纯船F在大學生思想的一些活躍點: 例如富二代與貧二代之爭，再比如拼爹族。這些思潮都無可避免地對青年學生的思想產生了消極的不良影響。所以這次命題組就針對這種好成績，好能力不如有個好爸爸的不良之風，命制了弘揚靠天靠地不如靠自己的獨立話題?！　⊥ㄟ^這幾次的CET作文題的命題情況，文都徐可風堅持認為，明年CET的作文命題仍然會堅持以上原則。　　二、范文　　徐可風老師提供的這篇范文，字數在150詞左右。里面有不少值得我們模仿的詞和句的用法。如第一句就用到一些高級的詞匯表達：thought-provoking， monopolize their childrens everything。再如最后一句在句型上采取的是非謂語動詞短語作主語，而businesses這個詞取的不是商業這個常用含義，而是取其主要責任，主要事務的含義。

　　CET4作文　　1，目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切　　2，為了讓孩子獨立，父母應該..　　How should parents help children to be independent?　　This is a thought-provoking social phenomenon that parents monopolize their childrens everything. From going to university, selecting majors to hunting for a job, parents make every crucial decision for their sons and daughters.　　No doubt, what the parents do leads to a most serious problemchildren are badly dependent on parental help. Every morning the children wake up, but they dont know what they should do and how they could do. They lose the ability to take care of themselves, and in turn, lose the opportunity to succeed.　　Stop! Please. Dont keep on spoiling the children anymore, because they need independence. These are some suggestions for parents. Firstly, parents should create an independent climate for their children. Secondly, parents should try to help children maintain their independence. Finally, parents should always believe that their children have the ability to make their own decisions in their lives.　　Helping children towards independence will always be our businesses.　　有一種愛叫做放手　　徐可風評析CET4作文　　一、命題　　從上半年的錯別字到這次的孩子獨立，充分體現了命題組的最大原則反映當前社會的具有普遍意義和教育意義的現象?！　∥覀兛梢钥纯船F在大學生思想的一些活躍點: 例如富二代與貧二代之爭，再比如拼爹族。這些思潮都無可避免地對青年學生的思想產生了消極的不良影響。所以這次命題組就針對這種好成績，好能力不如有個好爸爸的不良之風，命制了弘揚靠天靠地不如靠自己的獨立話題?！　⊥ㄟ^這幾次的CET作文題的命題情況，文都徐可風堅持認為，明年CET的作文命題仍然會堅持以上原則?！　《⒎段摹　⌒炜娠L老師提供的這篇范文，字數在150詞左右。里面有不少值得我們模仿的詞和句的用法。如第一句就用到一些高級的詞匯表達：thought-provoking， monopolize their childrens everything。再如最后一句在句型上采取的是非謂語動詞短語作主語，而businesses這個詞取的不是商業這個常用含義，而是取其主要責任，主要事務的含義。